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礼花
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 22:02:58    Post subject: 礼花 Reply with quote

礼花

你骄傲的
悬挂在
冰凉的夜空

终于相信
美艳绝倫的绚烂
绽放在
生命的尾声

12.22.04
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 22:07:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

恩,04年的~
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迪拜
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 22:27:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

姐姐的

内涵

目前是越来越深了

《礼花》

显然平了一点。
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遛达的七七
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 00:12:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

哎呀这么短!! 一分钟看六遍还富裕

……没看够,不过瘾,要不你再加长点儿?

:)
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 01:48:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

我绽放啰。。。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 07:04:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位朋友. 没人, 你可别绽放, 枫树等你浇水呢. Very Happy
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 08:05:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

美艳绝倫的绚烂
绽放在
生命的尾声


哲理~ Smile
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 21:09:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
我绽放啰。。。


喂喂喂,那个Nobody,你别别别呀!我这儿还没点火呢,你绽放个P呀你
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 22:27:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好你,有段时间没看你的诗歌了。“)
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 07:29:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

七小姐 wrote:
nobody wrote:
我绽放啰。。。


喂喂喂,那个Nobody,你别别别呀!我这儿还没点火呢,你绽放个P呀你


Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 07:29:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
问好你,有段时间没看你的诗歌了。“)


见到你很高兴, 问好
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 21:25:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

我想起来我曾经也写过礼花
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 22:49:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

美艳绝倫的绚烂
绽放在
生命的尾声
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 23:22:55    Post subject: 不错. Reply with quote

不错.美丽的诗.
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PostPosted: 2008-02-25 04:14:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

可以深入点浅见!!新年好!!!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-25 19:36:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有美感呢.唯美的特色 Very Happy 问好
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