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《日记》

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-12-27 08:20:02 Post subject: 《日记》

《日记》 2007年5月14日。南山崴。早晨。薄雾。四爷的身体挂在河边的柳树上七婶在家中痛哭．．．．．．中午。蝉噪十九岁的江月儿姐投河自尽岸上留下木匠那件洗得发白的蓝褂子．．．．．．傍晚。暮霭。七叔背着行囊走向村外一个女人站在屋顶上流着泪水张望．．．．．．深夜。殒月。村长家的房子燃起了大火疯女人在河边来回奔跑哀号．．．．．．札记：这一天像一只猫头鹰在夜里发出瘆人的叫声南山崴.石头炸开。河水倒流飞鸟迁徙。蚂蚁搬家．．．．．． _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-27 10:37:19 Post subject:

令人沉痛...... 问好诗人

迪拜
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Posted: 2007-12-27 11:43:15 Post subject:

悲痛一个生命脆弱的生活。

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-12-27 18:30:44 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

令人沉痛......

问好诗人

谢白水诗人！！！！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-12-27 18:31:39 Post subject:

迪拜 wrote:

悲痛

一个生命

脆弱的生活。

谢迪拜诗人！！！
_________________
走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-12-27 18:59:30 Post subject:

很好的诗剧。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

千里
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Posted: 2007-12-28 02:39:47 Post subject:

海軍Í，先祝你新的一年順心順意

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Posted: 2007-12-28 03:06:08 Post subject:

岸上留下木匠那件洗得发白的蓝褂子．．．．．． _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2007-12-29 23:50:46 Post subject:

痛苦悲惨的集结！ ——海军新年快乐！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-12-30 02:19:43 Post subject:

黑色的日子~在别的论坛已读祝海军新年快乐!

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-12-30 11:46:54 Post subject:

谢楼上的诗人们！祝各位诗人新年新气象！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

nobody
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Posted: 2007-12-30 17:26:26 Post subject:

一个女人站在屋顶上流着泪水张望形式新颖,语言精练,内容饱满... 其实,沉重得让人觉得此时谈诗歌技术是不道德. 谢赏读！！！问候诗人！！ _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

了因大兄
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Posted: 2008-01-02 02:19:38 Post subject:

真的不错.简明,悲痛的三幕诗剧. 问好! _________________ 我不是树上的黑木耳，我被爱过不能随随便便不回家 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236932795

杨海军
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Posted: 2008-01-03 10:53:13 Post subject:

[quote="nobody"]一个女人站在屋顶上流着泪水张望形式新颖,语言精练,内容饱满... 其实,沉重得让人觉得此时谈诗歌技术是不道德. 谢nobody诗人 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Posted: 2008-01-03 10:54:11 Post subject:

了因大兄 wrote:

真的不错.简明,悲痛的三幕诗剧.
问好!

谢谢了因大兄诗人！！！
_________________
走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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