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〖金金作品〗看雪

金金
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Posted: 2012-11-05 11:02:08 Post subject: 〖金金作品〗看雪

《看雪》/金金（骑云过客）纷纷荣荣，坠着田野，压着栏杆，你终于来了。刻我之心，领会那白，使我的眼力无长处，老天扔掉菌点万亿个白；使我只闻紧淋淋的轻巧下落。我在屋里看雪，我的骨架是这所房子，能感受大自然当头落的冷。——只是一笑。坐于屋内侧转身望，只能望见树的上半部分，象一棵棵干枯不动的大草；荡漾迷雾而狗吠起落，白雪铺瓦将要盖满。隔着两三层玻璃看雪，我的眼神迷茫起来。我想找一种相似，最多的是冷。雪落二月的田野，此刻降雪尚少麦苗绿可见，田边水泥屋檐只檐边能存雪。赏雪是赏其白色，赏其舞姿，赏其冷境，多在想！我见过的雪有几十场了，自小到现在；无论雪紧降一天还是现在，我能料到它的真实，雪是冷的，钟表是走着的，我愿远观其雅，就这样看着就行。 2012年2月16日 9时5分成文 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

邱俊伟
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Posted: 2012-11-06 02:07:41 Post subject:

文字很美，读起来意犹未尽。可惜短了，没读过瘾，呵呵。问候。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/qiujunwei2012

青洋
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Posted: 2012-11-06 07:38:50 Post subject:

問好！ _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

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Posted: 2012-11-06 11:07:25 Post subject:

金金好，文风有变许多，多了美感与成熟的思索。

金金
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Posted: 2012-11-06 11:34:35 Post subject:

以后写长的吧。问好！继续追寻—— _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2012-11-06 11:40:21 Post subject:

加油

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Posted: 2012-11-21 19:08:03 Post subject:

雪是冷的，钟表是走着的，我愿远观其雅，就这样看着就行。读着，忍不住再读，感觉自己在时间之外，雪在世界之外。。。。

金金
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Posted: 2012-11-22 18:24:14 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

雪是冷的，钟表是走着的，我愿远观其雅，就这样看着就行。
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好久不见：）

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赵福治
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Posted: 2012-11-27 13:24:06 Post subject:

雪是冷的，钟表是走着的，我愿远观其雅，就这样看着就行。。。。。看雪如同看自己的行在行走。问好兄弟

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