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《东北东北》(原创--请勿转载)
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PostPosted: 2015-10-07 05:06:22    Post subject: 《东北东北》(原创--请勿转载) Reply with quote

《东北东北》


东北东北,醒在春分
草在前面走,野花后面跟

醒在春分,黑土很累
年年结果,岁岁埋人

黑土很累,哪个鬼夜不能寐
谁的魂有家未归

有家未归,月牙冲北
望穿了秋水,疼透了心肺

月牙冲北,大平原盖上冰雪的白被
北风塞满黑熊的嘴

冰雪的白被,东北东北
谁的脾气是一把锤,把冬天砸碎



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PostPosted: 2015-10-17 22:18:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰雪的白被,东北东北
谁的脾气是一把锤,把冬天砸碎

首复。问好。羊年快乐。
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PostPosted: 2015-10-19 17:53:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

沖 簡化成了 冲
其實是
衝北。

在三點水與兩點水之間,簡體字還沒搞清楚,在簡化過程里,三點變兩點也非定律。
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PostPosted: 2015-10-19 23:12:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

有脾气的诗!~!
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PostPosted: 2015-10-21 22:19:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

很看重隔节的和不隔节的顶针错杂而行!亲亲远握!我正在东北,感觉到了故乡的氛围!
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PostPosted: 2015-10-21 22:19:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

很看重隔节的和不隔节的顶针错杂而行!亲亲远握!我正在东北,感觉到了故乡的氛围!
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PostPosted: 2015-10-28 02:25:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位!我目前在山西太原打工!问候各位!
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PostPosted: 2015-11-02 23:10:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

希望你能写更长一些的
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PostPosted: 2015-11-03 05:06:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2015-11-23 02:51:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢!短诗才难写!
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