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白水
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Posted: 2013-07-04 09:47:12 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

春色分明热闹来，千姿百态竞相开。

芬芳四溢香风到，只为甘霖摆玉台。*

注：白水兄早已泡好香茶在玉台等候大家，庆宏兄先品尝，我是闻到茶香赶过去凑热闹。

谢谢白水兄以及师友们！我已预订签证。九月初应该成行没问题。
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签证顺利就好，诗友们见到你定会很高兴。

白水
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Posted: 2013-07-04 20:40:17 Post subject:

七绝《蔷薇*诗殇》茫茫长夜风携雨，满苑飘红似冷秋。鼓瑟不鸣金缕曲，小诗一阙挽风流。 8

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-07-05 12:22:29 Post subject:

问好白水！签证想不到很难签。不知加国和美国为何如此严厉。七绝《蔷薇*诗殇》茫茫长夜风携雨，满苑飘红似冷秋。鼓瑟不鸣金缕曲，小诗一阙挽风流。我就和上《蔷薇-诗魂》平心静气笑颜开，绿叶丛中展露来。飘逸逍遥需谨慎，天然色彩步莲台。

白水
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Posted: 2013-07-06 20:23:16 Post subject:

谢谢笑聊和诗,问好周末

白水
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Posted: 2013-07-06 20:26:00 Post subject:

七绝《蔷薇*诗熾》暖玉生烟玛瑙红，莺歌燕语露华浓？涅槃沧海残阳血，火鸟重生舞碧空。 3

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-07-07 12:30:21 Post subject:

绝句--《蔷薇--欲飞凤凰》墙角飞停一凤凰，浴火涅槃心欲翔。只是重生污淖去，新衣亮丽着红妆。

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-07-08 08:32:43 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

绝句--《蔷薇--欲飞凤凰》
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欣赏问候！

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-07-08 09:16:20 Post subject:

七绝《蔷薇*诗语》粉嫩随风舒妙韵，清馨沐雨弄华章。胸怀自在飞寰宇，笔墨悠然走四方。

冷雨
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Posted: 2013-07-13 19:35:00 Post subject:

问好！雨就不和诗了！

冷雨
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Posted: 2013-07-13 19:35:42 Post subject:

问好！雨就不和诗了！

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-07-23 07:46:47 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

七绝《蔷薇*诗魂》

睥睨尘寰悄吐蕊，悠然怡苑绽芳菲
清魂雅魄谁相似？李杜挥毫你举杯

白水兄的诗影都很美，只是今天在你后院看不到了 Crying or Very sad

白水
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Posted: 2013-07-26 02:42:21 Post subject:

谢谢各位朋友，问好周末玫瑰是不多了，三两朵的开，但园子里的凌霄，百合，金汉莲，宇宙花，牵牛花，海棠花，，，，，开了一推

白水
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Posted: 2016-01-29 16:30:04 Post subject:

冬季读夏日和诗，别有一番情趣

黄洋界
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Posted: 2016-01-29 17:42:20 Post subject:

好诗不厌百回读，顿觉芬芳拂面来。吃反季菜，读反季诗，别有一番味道。谢谢白水！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

笑聊
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Posted: 2016-01-31 20:16:48 Post subject:

这氛围，是凝聚力所致！再赞！并问候朋友们！

晓松
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Posted: 2016-02-01 18:06:41 Post subject:

白水家的后院像个花园，特别到了夏秋季节，玫瑰、凌霄、百合、金汉莲、宇宙花、牵牛花、海棠等等，各种花草，一堆堆，一簇簇，竞相开放，美不胜收。现在想来，同样叫人浮想联翩，今作【江梅引】以记之。问候白水兄！【江梅引】争鲜斗艳满园载，竞相开，怒相开。百态千姿，蜂引蝶纷来。八月秋高风送爽，月花下，对清辉、酒一杯。一杯一杯真快哉! 意未阑，展异才。唱也唱也，唱不尽、亘古情怀。西舍东邻，笑我半痴呆。得意来时须尽兴，休辜负，满庭芳、绣成堆。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2016-02-02 07:32:55 Post subject:

一曲《江梅》，描尽白家园。欣赏！问好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白水
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Posted: 2016-02-02 17:23:34 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

好诗不厌百回读，顿觉芬芳拂面来。
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新春将至，问好老师

白水
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Posted: 2016-02-02 17:28:32 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

这氛围，是凝聚力所致！再赞！并问候朋友们！

问好笑聊，网络冲击报纸，微信冲击网络。但我觉得网络交流保留相对长久些，无论友情还是原作。问好新春

白水
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Posted: 2016-02-02 17:29:52 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

白水家的后院像个花园，特别到了夏秋季节，玫瑰、凌霄、百合、金汉莲、宇宙花、牵牛花、海棠等等，各种花草，一堆堆，一簇簇，竞相开放，美不胜收。现在想来，同样叫人浮想联翩，今作【江梅引】以记之。问候白水兄！

【江梅引】
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谢谢晓松，好文笔，欣赏。

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