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某年某月某仲秋

和平岛
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Posted: 2012-10-03 19:51:14 Post subject: 某年某月某仲秋

每一棵树的树梢都挂着一个月亮　　　　光阴在缓缓地摇晃　　　　　　　又似乎行吟　　　　一会是银盘　　　　一会儿又是弯刀如果爱国亦是游戏如果游戏亦是诗歌这每一片树叶都有各不相同的韵律从一个音节走向另一个音节，我问一个人的一生究竟能吃几回月饼　　这没头没尾的仲秋节之夜啊　　谁能独自忍受那一落千丈的瀑布每一棵树的树根都站着一位遥望故乡的游子　　　　时间仿佛停滞　　　　　　又似乎倒流　　　　一会是仰天长啸　　　　一会儿又是俯首低吟有谁可以抱着自己的影子起舞又有谁可以枕着月亮梦游失得去的是护照剥夺不了的是自己的祖国每一位游子的心中都装着一个李白冷不丁从酒壶里掏出一两颗滚烫的绝句趁着酒意未消有谁能够从翠绿的微澜里　　　　　　　　挤出一两滴牛奶又有谁能够从滚滚而来的奶水中　　　　提炼出一两颗诗歌的眼睛哦，你看，请回过头看刚刚的青涩现在已是树梢　不，是人间　　　　满目的沧桑　不，是诗人的　　　　地上霜　　　　头上霜　　　　　　　漫天　　　　　　　遍野 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

chenrunmin
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Posted: 2012-10-03 22:19:22 Post subject:

有意境,有感觉,感觉很美的，欣赏，祝福你节日快乐。 _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

游戏诗歌
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Posted: 2012-10-03 22:26:38 Post subject:

欣赏！

和平岛
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Posted: 2012-10-03 22:52:52 Post subject:

感谢chenrunmin 和游戏诗歌节日快乐 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2012-10-04 01:13:11 Post subject:

不愧為和平島主，詩寫得迴腸蕩氣，即便是詠中秋，也頗有力量。用詞和格式都美，意境近洛夫，氣魄又壓北島。 _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

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Posted: 2012-10-04 01:40:03 Post subject:

感谢青洋的鼓励我写诗歌,一般不在乎文字的排列,尽可能地用直白的文字,用自己的话,来表达自己的意思这一首, 试着玩玩文字的排列 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2012-10-04 03:38:30 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

这一首, 试着玩玩文字的排列
...

挺会玩

想问：
这难以忍受的那一落千丈的瀑布

又有谁能够从滚滚而来的奶水里
　　　　提炼出一两颗诗歌的眼睛
现在找到诗眼了吗 Confused

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Posted: 2012-10-04 04:25:39 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

这一首, 试着玩玩文字的排列
...

挺会玩:D

想问：
...

瞎玩

月儿弯弯照九洲
几家欢乐几家愁
几家夫妻同被寝
几家漂泊在它州

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Posted: 2012-10-05 10:31:40 Post subject:

诗以情感，人以类聚。问好岛版！

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Posted: 2012-10-05 11:25:38 Post subject:

风动 wrote:

诗以情感，人以类聚。问好岛版！ Smile

感谢风动兄

诗歌是爱好,另外还有hiking
什么时候一起去爬大山
Very Happy

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青洋
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Posted: 2012-10-07 03:29:19 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

风动 wrote:

诗以情感，人以类聚。问好岛版！ Smile

感谢风动兄
...

島主還有爬山那麼好玩的事，我也想參加。維島有哪些好山好水？
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Posted: 2012-10-07 03:57:39 Post subject:

这附近的山,我都很熟悉出一身汗,领略一次大自然的恩赐 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2012-10-07 04:15:57 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

这附近的山,我都很熟悉
出一身汗,领略一次大自然的恩赐
Very Happy

好極了，以後有機會去維島時要請島主帶路了。
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Posted: 2012-10-07 04:22:45 Post subject:

尽谊 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2012-10-07 04:34:45 Post subject:

拳拳游子意，殷殷故乡情。

hepingdao
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Posted: 2012-10-08 05:22:15 Post subject:

问好庆宏兄感恩节快乐! _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2012-10-16 12:18:09 Post subject:

问好！

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Posted: 2012-10-16 12:18:33 Post subject:

问好！

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