Adv Haiku Assignment 14: HAIJIN INTERACTION
2011-09-14 13:51:21
This isn\'t too hard of a concept really. It simply means the haijin places himself/herself into the haiku such as with "me, I, us" etc
This works out real well in certain cases... and brings a personal feel to it. Enjoyable technique if used correctly.
tonight
I am one of those gazing
at the bright moon
wondering
about the moon
I pack up my mind