Adv Haiku Assignment 6: PREDICAMENT

2011-09-05 06:38:09

Occasionally, a haijin comes across a situation of predicament. You can see the fun of these! They really place the reader into the moment... and the feel of that moment..... the "oh shoot".... the character of the haiku could be experiencing or threatened with. Yet, somehow, in the danger etc, there is humor. Kind of twisted... kind of fun. Interesting haiku to write.

missing the stop sign
missing the stop
police car’s behind

summer heat
Weiner sizzles
on the grill

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missing the stop sign
missing the stop
police car’s behind


Yikes, and that can really happen in real life! We always look over our shoulders when that happens, a good haiku about this situation.


summer heat
weiner sizzles
on the grill

A great haiku for today, as the BBQ\'s line up for holiday food and fun. These are very good haiku!-azure
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