Adv Haiku Assignment 3:HUMOR

2011-09-02 07:44:31

Humor is a common event and situation for a haijin to write about. All of the masters have employed the technique one time or another.

after high school
my kid and my money
go to Cornell

feeding the baby
as I raise the spoon
my mouth wide open

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Lake	azure85 graded your homework in Course / Advanced Study of Haiku on assignment HUMOR. You passed! You got 15 points. • reply 4 hours ago after high school my kid and my money go to Cornell Ghads, this is great! I am still laughing, this is so good. feeding the baby as I raise the spoon my mouth wide open Very good scene, you capture the moment when we really do this, and the mother bird syndrome is there. These are wonderful examples of humor in haiku. -azure

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azure85 graded your homework in Course / Advanced Study of Haiku on assignment HUMOR. You passed! You got 15 points. • reply
4 hours ago

after high school
my kid and my money
go to Cornell

Ghads, this is great! I am still laughing, this is so good.

feeding the baby
as I raise the spoon
my mouth wide open

Very good scene, you capture the moment when we really do this, and the mother bird syndrome is there. These are wonderful examples of humor in haiku.

-azure

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