Fragrance Hall of wind over water.
Xiulian open, a little glimpse of who the moon; who did not sleep, Yi Chai cross coming from the chaos pillow.
Hand-carrying elements together, court users silent, to cross the river when the see Shu Xing Han.
Ask how the night? The night was the third watch, Jinbo light, low ropes jade turn.
However, when flexor westerly to, not Road fleeting, secret substitution.
【Notes】 ①洞仙歌:唐教坊曲名。又名《洞仙歌令》、《羽仙歌》、《洞仙词》、《洞中仙》、《洞仙歌慢》。
②金波:月光。
③玉绳:星名。北斗星第五星叫玉衡,玉衡北面两星叫玉绳。
④不道:不觉。
【Review】 这是作者据前人所作词之残句续作之词,上阕写人物与环境。人物是有非凡的神仙姿质,风度娴雅,馨香妩媚。环境则如月宫瑶台,毫不俗气。下阕第一句“起来携素手”紧接前意,“试问”数句将月下情人私语境界表达得亲昵而缠绵。金波淡荡,星汉暗度,颇有情调。“但屈指”突转,暗示良辰美景终有尽日之惋惜。“西风”来而“流年”换,由夏至秋,是自然之规律。“不觉”二字道尽其妙。写帝王艳情,表达得清凉幽寂,可见作者超然的审美品位。
Snow clouds cleared, put by rice pool homes.
Willow in the human eye will be blue.
Many more romantic, a little plum heart, matched far, roughly frown light chuckle.
Spring of the year benefits are not concentrated Fang, Xiao-Yan Shu, Hong best Jiaoruan.
When the Ching Ming, Benny hundred purple flowers are chaotic, lost the spring half.
Shaoguang were allowed to crowd chasing tour early, but incomes for tax cold spell, drunk from the warm red.
【Notes】 ①见前晁补之《水龙吟》注。
②颦(pín):皱眉。
③小艳:指柳。疏香:即梅。林逋诗云:“疏影横斜水清浅,暗香浮动月黄昏。”
④韶光:美好的春光,常喻青春年华。
【Review】 这是一首咏春之作,极力赞美春光,上阕写冬雪后放晴,杨柳绿绽,表示对人类的友好;梅花提醒人们及早探春,莫留遗憾,向人们送来微笑。柳与梅极具人情味,乃是由于作者对它们的深爱并由此展开下阕。“小艳”指柳,它虽不艳丽,却格外醒目。“到清明”三句,以“百花”在清明时盛开后即凋残、春已过去一半的事实,反衬柳梅独占春天前半的荣耀,并引发出结尾的议论:探春者要早占春景,不怕春寒,醉心畅游,内心自暖!其实,此处含有哲理意蕴:人们莫要负青春,莫畏险阻,早抓时机,以期有所作为。
The status of each youth, style greatly.
There Shengge lanes, Qiluo courtyard.
Allure Qiao Xiao flower surface.
Ya unbridled state, bright eyes back to the United States and hope.
Concentric string together.
Operator country Yan Xian material, turning hate meet late.
Tempting.
Bridal chamber quietly, Xiupi heavy, I'll never rest Huan, a total of Hay Hill League, remember Cuiyun steal scissors.
And Ming Fung to swallow.
Liu Keng Yam spent between work times.
Feeling nostalgic.
The meantime, the secret things about how light pity limits.
Bear parting.
Status closed deep wish.
May heaven and earth, Mu-Yun Zhao Yu long meet.
Chennai Fu powder, handsome, elegant Menglan products.
Warm gold silver screen sub-accounts.
And charm pillow, light cuddle light lean, green and Jiao Hong Cha.
Operators smile, non-price per Pei Pearl.
Leisure.
Each direction, the bridal chamber deep, very painful pity pet, it may feel more isolated sub-light, early James sprinkling of people change of position back.
Never more than guess surprised permissiveness.
More on Hong Yun Jian, need to write with deep heart.
Love earn the eyebrows, claimant re-painting.
Endure solitary Yanye.
Light is not lightly broken homes.
Mandarin duck under the quilt.
Often willing to change of position, good days, good night.
Gui Ying order lying idle stay night.
Lu cool, how much disorder cold Jiang, Beijing God far, only near the blue bridge.
Crystal curtain to come down, mica screen to open, cold soak light beauty powder.
Will be many out, pay and golden statue, a total investment Xiao, Liu Xia exhausting.
More portable to take, Hu bed south tower, looking to do human jade, Su Qiu ares.
【Notes】 ①泗州:安徽泗县。
②幂(mì):遮盖。
③寒螀(jiāng):寒蝉。
④蓝桥:在陕西蓝田县东南,桥架蓝水之上,故名。世传其地有仙窟,唐裴航遇云英于此桥。
⑤云母屏:云母为花岗岩主要成分,可作屏风,艳丽光泽。
⑥流霞:仙酒名。
⑦胡床:古代一种轻便坐具,可以折叠。
【Review】 这是一篇即景抒情的佳作。作者借中秋之月,抒发人生悲凉的感叹。开头写中秋夜开始时因为云合,未见月轮。一会儿,万倾碧波上飞起一轮明镜。月华明朗,洒满阶庭。此时先抑后扬,给人一种期待后的喜悦。词人“床卧”赏月,由“露凉”而想到寒蝉,而想到自己的失意与飘零,“惟有蓝桥路近”只有那些青楼歌妓能体谅我的苦衷,无限凄凉在心中!下阕写室内与“佳人”共赏。境界仍极凄冷。结尾三句写登楼赏月,“玉做人间,素秋千顷”作豪放之语,表现出词人超越尘世,愿欣赏千里清景的疏放情怀。此作首尾呼应,中间虽然凄清,整体上,仍属疏放达观之作。
Hop in Zhaoyang Palace.
Swallow because there is very human?
See the end of Iraq,
South Road only solution possible,
More Jiangbei,
Have ever used to see.
But unfortunately the situation in Iraq is good,
Understand angry people,
Laugh when a long face with a peach.
Adoration before the end of the wine,
To see more when the
Like Nende,
Can get a few back look?
Iraq does not blink until children Quzhuo,
Will blink at the end of efforts
Left to see several times.
【Review】 此为作者赠官妓赵佛奴之作。词中盛赞赵氏的美貌及作者对她的爱恋。全词语言俚俗泼辣,感情坦率直露,堪称元曲的先声。
上片起首三句,先赞美赵佛奴象赵氏姊妹燕、合德一样美貌,不应生活在民间,而应居住在后妃的宫殿里 。这里用典 :赵飞燕赵合德姊妹东汉成帝时官人,成阳侯赵临之女,善歌舞。这里用典非常确切,赵家姊妹姓赵,佛奴也姓赵;赵家姊妹善歌舞,佛奴亦善歌舞。在此基础上,词人又把昭阳殿与人间作了对比,意思是赵佛奴当官妓是委屈了她 ,凭她的美貌,应当享受后妃的待遇。这种抑扬结合的方法,目的仍在于扬。下面是以江北与江南对比,“见伊底”,犹今语“见她的”,底即的,这和下片的“恁地”,都是宋时方言。这几句是说,凡是见到她的人,都说她色艺双绝,独步江南。但词人认为即使把江北也算上,也很少见到这样的美人。过片三句先从赵佛奴本人写她的美,再从别人对她的反映,烘托她的美,并且抒写了词人对她的爱恋。词人说赵佛奴不仅容颜长得娇,而且性情生得好。她从不使小性子,总是脸带微笑,灿若桃花。此三句,廖廖数笔,便把人物的形象活灵活现地描绘出来。“向尊前”几句写他们在酒席筵前相见,从而点出了各自的身份。因为作者是词客 ,故佛奴为之歌舞以侑觞。可是赵佛奴长得太美了,以致词人顾不上饮酒,只是不停地向她注目,被她深深地吸引住了 。“似恁地 ”,意犹似这般。“恁地”,如此、这样。“能得几回细看”一语,把词人抓紧时机、细心审美的心情和盘托出。结拍三句,用夸张的手法,绘神绘色地写词人看这美女,连眼睛也不眨一眨 ,为的是把眨眼的工夫省下来 ,好多看上几眼,以此表现词人爱美之切之深,亦反衬出赵佛奴之美艳绝伦。
词中写赵佛奴的美貌,表现技巧上与汉乐府《陌上桑》颇为类似,多角度、多侧面地烘托、渲染出美人容颜之秀丽。作者善于运用夸张手法,以痴语、无语突出词人对于赵佛奴钟情之深、爱恋之切。这样的语言最能揭示人物心灵 ,可谓拭尽铅华,尽露本色,富有浓郁的生活气息。