冷巉
举人
Joined: 10 Mar 2007
Posts: 1106
Location: 中国十堰
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 Posted: 2007-12-09 09:30:45 Post subject: 群冬语 |
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群冬语
文/冷巉
何事匆匆，到群外潜行，孤胆流云。长空夜短，回群欲去修行。群外欲望，怕难行，明日早聚。还休去，夜夜梦醒，孤梦织就心云。
还道不如归来，却无人续篇，泪珠流零。冬之雪花今未到，又自冷淬。何时亲见，梦里君，帅气模样。却到是，人生流放，径向大漠西行。
20:59 2007-12-9
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kokho
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Joined: 30 Nov 2006
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Location: Singapore
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| Posted: 2007-12-09 12:49:57 Post subject: |
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也是一番心境 ：０ 古意新写？
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2007-12-09 19:29:52 Post subject: |
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| 有古韵的味儿. |
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半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760
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| Posted: 2007-12-09 21:27:16 Post subject: |
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| 古韵~问好冷! |
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荷梦
进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006
Posts: 2826
Location: 湖北，黄梅
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| Posted: 2007-12-11 15:08:31 Post subject: |
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| 心境凄凉，怎么啦？问好！ |
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