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好歌新词-20: 《温馨平安夜》-- 为《周传雄.黄昏》填新词
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PostPosted: 2007-12-10 04:17:24    Post subject: 好歌新词-20: 《温馨平安夜》-- 为《周传雄.黄昏》填新词 Reply with quote

温馨平安夜

注1 某年十月我独自来到加国.当年感悟,此歌记之.
注2.此歌将刊登在《渥京周末.原创空间》2007/12/21

填词/楚天舒
曲/《周传雄.黄昏》
http://www.youtube.com/v/bm8GnuIln98

刚来那两三月 尽情地感受这一切
雪花若梨花纷飞染白大街
正为我托出新世界

圣诞树在街边 闪烁着多彩的喜悦
你寄来节日礼物精美特别
也寄来幽情的季节

一弯明月陪我窗前数那日历最后几页
却无从数清你我不变的情结
温馨的平安夜 彩灯照亮屋檐 钟声飘过山野

一弯明月陪我屋前默默相对茫茫白雪
仿佛有情爱之线随微风摇曳
温馨的平安夜 向着遥远中原 无言仅有思念
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PostPosted: 2007-12-10 18:57:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

一弯明月陪我屋前默默相对茫茫白雪
无言仅有思念

情感真挚
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PostPosted: 2007-12-10 19:10:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好天舒, 哪天教教我们写歌词 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-12-10 23:38:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好天舒。是不是大陆上那个女作家天舒?
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楚天舒
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 09:27:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢枫叶岛主 鼓励..

多谢白水 鼓励....想学写歌词啊? 容易, 正好刚来了位歌词大师...照夜..

杨海军 wrote:
问好天舒。是不是大陆上那个女作家天舒?


问好海军.. 我得去查查...你有没有她的链接?
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