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梅影三叠
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PostPosted: 2007-09-15 23:38:11    Post subject: 鹧鸪天 秋日三首 Reply with quote

鹧鸪天 秋日三首



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1.惯看长天不觉寒,萧疏黄叶正翩然。窗前竹影千年画,室内书香万古弦。
 情已醉,意成颠,诗心总愿伴丘山。红尘愁怨随风逝,漫数黄花亦是禅。



2.摇落常悲羁旅人,情思总向故乡颦。揪心慈母容颜老,回首故园情趣真。
 风咏叹,雨逡巡,敲窗夜半梦芳芬。孤身在外天涯远,小字微醺遥寄君。



3.静夜温书兴未阑,窗前鸟唱露轻寒。东坡俊逸谈禅事,清照凄凉写旧年。
 游瀚海,上青天。诗情浩荡比神仙。倾樽举酒邀陶李,古韵今声共笑颜。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-16 00:27:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

含蓄洒脱。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-16 21:11:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗情浩荡比神仙!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-17 06:09:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

更喜歡其二,情意較深遠。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-17 08:44:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋日三首,吟出三情:漫数黄花,遥念慈母,酒邀陶李.

诗情浓郁,欣赏学习了.
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PostPosted: 2007-09-19 17:58:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

窗前竹影千年画,室内书香万古弦。欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-20 07:21:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢莹雪,冰清大姐,黄洋界,戴珏,晓松朋友
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PostPosted: 2007-09-22 04:26:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

竹露音清渐浸寒,乡愁思望静凝然。晚钟烟寺随云燕,月店晨鸡带雨弦。
杯未倒,舞何颠,载将花影酌溪山。毫端唱出凉波意,犹倩嫦娥一悟禅。

万种清愁万种人,何人眉宇总含颦。挤来双泪空余怅,付与温巢好个真。
琴懒拨,步慵巡,此情谁信索流芬。高楼远目临风织,微展柔肠酒共君。

舞约轻盈曲向阑,冰壶莹影入杯寒。墨台诗意宵如昼,玉指琴音月似年。
风掠地,水呼天,白云来往载游仙。深斟浅饮何须劝,堆积多情掩醉颜。

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PostPosted: 2007-09-22 18:59:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

提!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-23 00:43:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏了。各首都特有味道。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-28 19:30:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

征尘载袖 wrote:
竹露音清渐浸寒,乡愁思望静凝然。晚钟烟寺随云燕,月店晨鸡带雨弦。
杯未倒,舞何颠,载将花影酌溪山。毫端唱出凉波意,犹倩嫦娥一悟禅。

万种清愁万种人,何人眉宇总含颦。挤来双泪空余怅,付与温巢好个真。
琴懒拨,步慵巡,此情谁信索流芬。高楼远目临风织,微展柔肠酒共君。

舞约轻盈曲向阑,冰壶莹影入杯寒。墨台诗意宵如昼,玉指琴音月似年。
风掠地,水呼天,白云来往载游仙。深斟浅饮何须劝,堆积多情掩醉颜。

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谢谢和诗,收藏了哦:)
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PostPosted: 2007-09-28 19:36:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
提!

多谢晓松朋友提读
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PostPosted: 2007-09-28 19:37:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

游向高原的鱼 wrote:
欣赏了。各首都特有味道。

谢谢一直以来的关注,握手:)
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 16:37:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢朋友们啊,握手!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-15 09:53:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

六首好词,真耐看读。
“红尘愁怨随风逝,漫数黄花亦是禅”
“揪心慈母容颜老,回首故园情趣真”
“晚钟烟寺随云燕,月店晨鸡带雨弦”
“深斟浅饮何须劝,堆积多情掩醉颜”
真好!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 04:08:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢征尘朋友妙和!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 04:11:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢晓松和高原鱼朋友~
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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 05:21:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

梅影好三词,载袖好三和。三声击掌,三声鼓掌!耐读欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-15 01:23:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候所有朋友@
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PostPosted: 2007-12-15 01:25:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

征尘载袖 wrote:
竹露音清渐浸寒,乡愁思望静凝然。晚钟烟寺随云燕,月店晨鸡带雨弦。
杯未倒,舞何颠,载将花影酌溪山。毫端唱出凉波意,犹倩嫦娥一悟禅。

万种清愁万种人,何人眉宇总含颦。挤来双泪空余怅,付与温巢好个真。
琴懒拨,步慵巡,此情谁信索流芬。高楼远目临风织,微展柔肠酒共君。

舞约轻盈曲向阑,冰壶莹影入杯寒。墨台诗意宵如昼,玉指琴音月似年。
风掠地,水呼天,白云来往载游仙。深斟浅饮何须劝,堆积多情掩醉颜。

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欣赏@@
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