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晚对菱花

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Posted: 2007-12-27 12:01:54 Post subject: 晚对菱花

你走时，留给我的眼睛是一瓢清水，礼物不再重要江边，惟有美人的泪才能真正牵动江东父老的心我知道，你的笑声并不重要，重要的是最后的颤音。犹如帝王带来的硝烟总让诗人在半醒半梦中哭穷晚风吹来时，你的诺言在波光里安息。脚印路过窗前我把一颗没有净土的心，或挥霍或雕琢中国,江苏,张敏

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Posted: 2007-12-27 13:51:46 Post subject:

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Posted: 2007-12-27 15:41:25 Post subject:

欣赏了问好 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2007-12-27 19:09:14 Post subject:

不错。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-12-28 10:59:47 Post subject:

晚风吹来时，你的诺言在波光里安息。脚印路过窗前我把一颗没有净土的心，或挥霍或雕琢 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-12-28 11:35:52 Post subject:

晚风吹来时，你的诺言在波光里安息。脚印路过窗前我把一颗没有净土的心，或挥霍或雕琢 ........不错的一首,提读.

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Posted: 2007-12-28 11:53:41 Post subject:

不错的诗歌

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Posted: 2007-12-29 12:08:16 Post subject:

谢谢大家,远握. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

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Posted: 2008-01-03 11:26:12 Post subject:

怎么没有人再提呀,问好大家. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

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Posted: 2008-01-03 14:34:50 Post subject:

呵呵，拎起耳朵继续提~

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Posted: 2008-01-06 11:49:42 Post subject:

谢谢明月,远握. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

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Posted: 2008-01-06 16:19:24 Post subject:

细腻的笔调欣赏了问好 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:45:41 Post subject:

谢谢莞君,远握. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

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Posted: 2008-01-11 05:10:26 Post subject:

你走時，留給我的眼睛是一瓢清水，禮物不再重要您期待用這樣的起句去引領讀者？白小姐特意委託我向您問好，您好啊！））））35 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-01-13 11:52:16 Post subject:

谢谢白小姐,谢谢詩盜喜裸評,远握. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

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