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读载袖,暗香《江城梅花引》
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 15:43:07    Post subject: 读载袖,暗香《江城梅花引》 Reply with quote

读载袖,暗香《江城梅花引》

脚步飘摇,
醉眼看稿。
脸飞红霞,
键盘乱敲。
发送上网,
好词真妙。
抛却怨恼,
开心一笑。


征尘载袖《江城梅花引》:

清风何故惹凡尘?
恼残春,怨残春,稀里糊涂,洒泪别秋痕。
叵奈北风偏不雪,载红叶,倚兰桡、作酒神。

酒神,酒神,乱缳纷。
浅觅源,深闭门,唤起唤起,唤起那、波散烟昏。
琴裂弦留,常叹与谁存。
恨得烛花啼泪薄,唇颤抖,发飘摇、左右分。


暗香如沁《江城梅花引.感》:

诗书案上已生尘,
怕三春,又三春。一夜寒霜,香老了无痕。
万种豪情今复去,哀筝远,叹声声、正失神。
 
失神!失神!泪纷纷,
掩重门,酒半温。醉也醉也,醉他个、不识晨昏。
梦里情怀,邀月共温存。
那管菱花清瘦影,今得趣,向苍天、借几分。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 16:59:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

我上网也正为此:抛却怨恼, 开心一笑。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-28 04:57:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

开心一笑. Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-11-28 12:54:12    Post subject: Re: 读载袖,暗香《江城梅花引》 Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
读载袖,暗香《江城梅花引》

一步三摇,
醉眼看稿。
脸飞红霞,
键盘乱敲。
发送上网,
好词真妙。
抛却怨恼,
开心一笑。


四言诗已经不常见了,知兄是随手沾来,好!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-28 16:33:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢晓松,暗香,秋叶赏读戏作,开心就好。祝时时开心!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-28 20:52:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

俺很开心。 Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 19:32:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh老师,什么叫捧杀?这就叫捧杀。实际上暗香如沁的《江城梅花引·感》要比我的早^_^
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 20:09:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

征尘载袖 wrote:
qinghongh老师,什么叫捧杀?这就叫捧杀。实际上暗香如沁的《江城梅花引·感》要比我的早^_^

载袖MM,早晚不要紧,你和暗香都写得很好。但你们词风不同,各有千秋。在你们面前,我只有学习的份,你叫我老师,实在是折杀我了!大家网上为诗友。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 20:29:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

很赞同mm的话。确实该叫老师。
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