William Zhou周道模
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 Posted: 2007-11-25 17:07:46 Post subject: [原创新诗] 晕 海 |
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晕 海
潜海上来
大海在颠簸天地
大脑膨胀世界的混沌
呕吐海水
吐出几十年的悲情
呕吐胆汁
吐出几千年的悲剧
苦水吐尽之后
大海在安抚天地
眼睛还原世界的清晰
我把泪水交给大海保鲜
你可听见我泪水的涛声
吐了海水
我就能吞吐海风
吐了苦水
我就要吞吐海云
2004．3．28
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白水
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| Posted: 2007-11-25 17:25:33 Post subject: |
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| 激情如海, 直抒心意. |
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杯中冲浪
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William Zhou周道模
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| Posted: 2007-11-26 05:22:11 Post subject: |
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感谢白水老师和杯中冲浪的赏读!
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-11-26 17:30:53 Post subject: |
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晕海也能写得这样激情~问好周！  |
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William Zhou周道模
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| Posted: 2007-12-02 20:11:36 Post subject: |
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问好明月! 你写得多, 发得多, 评的多!向你学习!
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迪拜
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