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《父亲》

威海
童生

Joined: 05 Nov 2007
Posts: 27

威海Collection

Posted: 2007-12-01 07:28:55 Post subject: 《父亲》

父亲威海不大不小的驾驶楼里承重瘦小的身影握着方向盘驶在幻想的道路道路却不是想像那么平坦他总和你开着无言的玩笑放弃唯一的选择然后奔向远方的另一片天地寻求那渺茫的生机

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2007-12-01 08:55:35 Post subject:

还诗于本. 形象, 清新, 自然, 且不失追求. 虽然不能说最佳, 但对当今诗人们愈来愈多的悔涩是个冲击. 愿你写出更好的作品.

莞君
秀才

Joined: 20 Oct 2007
Posts: 561
Location: 中国陕西
莞君Collection

Posted: 2007-12-01 10:06:45 Post subject:

欣赏深情的一个提 _________________ 莞君

迪拜
同进士出身

Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588

迪拜Collection

Posted: 2007-12-01 19:41:47 Post subject:

感觉是有的开阔点思路这样，题材可以多样化，多尝试，会有收获

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