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让我打开你的眼泪

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-11-19 01:39:57 Post subject: 让我打开你的眼泪

让我打开你的眼泪让我打开你的眼泪那里面蕴含着草原和哈达羊群马匹和草一起被牧鞭驱赶向远方长满歌声的敖包逶迤的白水在青草的睫毛下闪动着美玉的光芒早晨来临你的鞭子上长出了冬青树鸟儿喙出歌声银灰色的马背上开出闪电一杯下马酒醉倒多少琴声请不要再流下泪水让我拥抱你在多年前丢失的草原 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

kokho
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Posted: 2007-11-19 08:50:50 Post subject:

. 问好朋友出差回来高兴看到你：）。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-19 21:02:16 Post subject:

请不要再流下泪水让我拥抱你在多年前丢失的草原真情的就是感人的

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-11-20 01:29:32 Post subject:

请不要再流下泪水让我拥抱你在多年前丢失的草原问好海军~

kokho
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Posted: 2007-11-20 10:00:13 Post subject:

早晨来临你的鞭子上长出了冬青树鸟儿喙出歌声银灰色的马背上开出闪电一杯下马酒醉倒多少琴声《》喜欢：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-11-20 15:59:13 Post subject:

一杯下马酒醉倒多少琴声欣赏 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-11-27 02:03:06 Post subject:

问候诗人们！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-11-27 02:30:45 Post subject:

哈哈，还是没有感觉。如果陌生一些，反而好。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

古井
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Posted: 2007-11-27 18:30:32 Post subject:

幽怨，辽阔，学习老师的诗！

子花
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Posted: 2007-11-27 21:22:14 Post subject:

让我打开你的眼泪那里面蕴含着草原和哈达羊群马匹和草一起被牧鞭驱赶向远方长满歌声的敖包逶迤的白水在青草的睫毛下闪动着美玉的光芒很喜欢这样的表达！问好海军诗人！！

君子爱莲
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Posted: 2007-11-27 22:51:28 Post subject:

让我打开你的眼泪,打开一个多年前丢失的草原,学习,问好!

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-11-28 02:22:09 Post subject:

谢楼上的诗人们！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

迪拜
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Posted: 2007-11-28 21:23:57 Post subject:

歌谣的方式不错

彭世学
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Posted: 2007-11-29 06:16:44 Post subject:

让我打开你的眼泪那里面蕴含着草原和哈达羊群马匹和草一起被牧鞭驱赶向远方长满歌声的敖包逶迤的白水在青草的睫毛下闪动着美玉的光芒精彩！问好！！ _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-11-29 17:01:13 Post subject:

谢迪拜、彭世学二位诗人赏读！！！祝好 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-11-30 00:44:15 Post subject:

早晨来临你的鞭子上长出了冬青树鸟儿喙出歌声银灰色的马背上开出闪电一杯下马酒醉倒多少琴声好。诗人的诗奔放 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

奥冬
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Posted: 2007-11-30 01:17:22 Post subject:

一杯下马酒醉倒多少琴声 _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

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Posted: 2007-12-05 17:59:14 Post subject:

喜欢，问候诗人 _________________ 个人主页：http://blog.sina.com.cn/afirewang

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