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半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-11-30 08:57:11 Post subject: 《梅》

《梅》文/半溪明月挥一段盘虬枯墨的苍劲画三两朵花团锦簇一笔妖娆，再笔妩媚难写的是枝头那意韵含苞墨香，暗沁西墙囚于硬质镜框。冷艳被过往的人侧目或评赏梅，若蜡铸的女子一再沉默。没人知道她分分秒秒的渴盼那幽谷山涧，有白色的梦比她更冷更冰洁的雪花悠悠潇潇飘落给她最疼最惊颤的一吻玻璃上，梦一次次打滑跌落的锋利，咬伤食指血一滴一滴，晕染梅枝

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Posted: 2007-11-30 09:13:35 Post subject:

这就开始了，哈哈。我可只从画上见过梅花。惨。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-11-30 09:20:59 Post subject:

红梅一艳 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-11-30 09:24:29 Post subject:

哈，开赛　顶个

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Posted: 2007-11-30 09:29:56 Post subject:

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这就开始了，哈哈。我可只从画上见过梅花。惨。

呵呵，这就是看画的联想~到网上搜下,很多~

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Posted: 2007-11-30 09:32:39 Post subject:

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红梅一艳

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岛的梅花好象早写过了~ Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-11-30 09:34:59 Post subject:

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哈，开赛　顶个

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期待你的咯~~

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Posted: 2007-11-30 09:35:07 Post subject:

还可以写的, 只是灵感枯竭了 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-11-30 09:39:48 Post subject:

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还可以写的, 只是灵感枯竭了
Embarassed

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扭转身,你的背后
可是梅花?

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Posted: 2007-11-30 09:59:00 Post subject:

可是你一想起你的名字就有梅花落下来 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-11-30 10:09:06 Post subject:

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可是你
一想起你的名字
就有梅花落下来
Very Happy

Very Happy

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你的头像啊~是桃花还是梅花? Very Happy

Very Happy

下了,再见~

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Posted: 2007-11-30 10:13:11 Post subject:

一想起你的名字就有梅花落下来梅花落下来的时候我却又不在看连你的眉心都翩跹着寂寞的蝴蝶连寂寞都落满了梅花的枝头我的心头还是空空空的白 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-11-30 10:24:06 Post subject:

一想起你的名字就有梅花落下来顶一下。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-11-30 11:43:44 Post subject:

明月姐！你眼镜快掉了！！！

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Posted: 2007-11-30 14:13:17 Post subject:

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明月姐！你眼镜快掉了！！！

我老早都想跟她说了,呵呵!
古今结合的作品,很不错!
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Posted: 2007-11-30 15:33:06 Post subject:

墨香，暗沁西墙囚于硬质镜框。冷艳被过往的人侧目或评赏梅，若蜡铸的女子一再沉默。没人知道她分分秒秒的渴盼遗憾！妙！问好！！ _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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Posted: 2007-11-30 19:14:55 Post subject:

很想学习这种“不介入”的写法。好！梅花须逊三分雪雪输梅花一段香也想帮你扶一下眼镜----哈哈 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-11-30 19:19:42 Post subject:

明月你的笔锋上有一股巾帼英雄的气势，你干脆叫花木兰算了． _________________ 我是个平凡的人，但我喜欢在平凡的日子里做不平凡的事情，每个人都可以这么来作去认为自己的存在。

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Posted: 2007-11-30 20:38:41 Post subject:

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一想起你的名字
就有梅花落下来

梅花落下来的时候
我却又不在

看
连你的眉心
都翩跹着寂寞的蝴蝶

连寂寞
都落满了梅花的枝头

我的心头
还是空空空的白
Laughing

Laughing

呵呵，我脸上的眼镜像不像只大蝴蝶？算了许多人都说我眼镜快掉下来了，换张小的

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Posted: 2007-11-30 20:43:41 Post subject:

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明月你的笔锋上有一股巾帼英雄的气势，你干脆叫花木兰算了．

有戴眼镜的花木兰？我是手无缚鸡之力的弱女子，男娇娥啊～这是别的论坛有人当我是男的，另一个认识的人的解释 Smile

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