莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-27 00:33:52 Post subject: 菩萨蛮-感 |
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冬来冷透群芳退,
此时慵懒诗文废。
银粟落琼庐,
叹吟如玉图。
案头挥笔就,
思绪云涌秀。
瞬息旧年游,
弹指明岁留。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2007-11-27 16:47:08 Post subject: |
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“思绪云涌秀。”好句。问MM冬安! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-27 16:56:57 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
“思绪云涌秀。”好句。问MM冬安! |
谢谢GG点评,GG冬安! |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2007-12-02 17:54:58 Post subject: |
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冬来冷透群芳退,
此时慵懒诗文废。——不可慵懒废诗文。
案头挥笔就,
思绪云涌秀。——终于战胜了慵懒。赞一个! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-02 18:40:08 Post subject: |
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晓松 wrote: |
冬来冷透群芳退,
此时慵懒诗文废。——不可慵懒废诗文。
案头挥笔就,
思绪云涌秀。——终于战胜了慵懒。赞一个! |
谢谢晓松兄 我一定继续努力。  |
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