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[原创新诗] 海边落日
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PostPosted: 2007-12-02 20:28:08    Post subject: [原创新诗] 海边落日 Reply with quote

海 边 落 日

流浪者

脱去海水……

哭尽咸腥的热

抖不掉浪花的伤

椰子树

在抚慰你的沧桑

所有汉字团拢的血影

胀痛了我的胸襟
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PostPosted: 2007-12-02 21:11:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

所有汉字团拢的血影
胀痛了我的胸襟

这首是新写的吧?
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2007-12-02 21:52:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

回明月:

和前三首是一起的,但表现形式不一样.

前三首写实一些, 这首提炼概括多些.
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PostPosted: 2007-12-02 22:02:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

读了
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