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《窗外的风景》
云南袁江
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 09:21:41    Post subject: 《窗外的风景》 Reply with quote
《 窗外的风景 》


一朵哭泣的百合啊
你藏在大洋的彼岸
这一封无法寄达的信
只写我窗外的风景－－

曾经是起伏的远山
山色青黛因树而变
那时朋友们常来常往
我们常常站在窗前

后来是崛起的楼群
顶上水塔电视天线
朋友们已经很少见面
有时在电话里聊天

如今是逼近的高墙
墙上砖缝横线直线
凌晨有朋友在QQ留言
上网读了我的诗篇
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 10:01:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
很有感触, 欢迎新朋友
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迪拜
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 21:04:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
非常好

人生，时代的变迁

跃然而出
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云南袁江
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 21:04:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢白水！接龙诗已作修改，请多批评指点！
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云南袁江
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PostPosted: 2007-12-15 00:13:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
迪拜 wrote:
非常好

人生，时代的变迁

跃然而出



问好迪拜并谢评点！
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