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《２１》　sunyunjuan2008　来报道　：）

sunyunjuan2008
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Posted: 2007-11-22 08:14:08 Post subject: 《２１》　sunyunjuan2008　来报道　：）

。大家好　我来慢了　：）

sunyunjuan2008
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Posted: 2007-11-22 08:38:28 Post subject:

嘿嘿，老师辛苦啦

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-11-22 09:25:02 Post subject:

欢迎sunyunjuan2008老师光临指导哦 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-11-22 11:15:32 Post subject:

. 热烈欢迎　sunyunjuan　美媚。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

sunyunjuan2008
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Posted: 2007-11-22 23:12:45 Post subject:

老师，我胆战心惊噢

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Posted: 2007-11-22 23:16:01 Post subject:

图片真漂亮，谢谢但还是紧张噢

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Posted: 2007-11-22 23:18:16 Post subject:

怕什么第一次讲课吗 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-11-22 23:20:50 Post subject:

谢谢hepingdao网友千万不能称老师噢，希望我们在这里互相学习我会用我最真挚的友情对待每个朋友

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Posted: 2007-11-22 23:33:06 Post subject:

握手 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

sunyunjuan2008
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Posted: 2007-11-22 23:57:37 Post subject:

刚刚看了你的博客，该称你为老师才对希望多多关照啊握手

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Posted: 2007-11-23 00:07:24 Post subject:

嘿嘿，到这里什么都不懂呀，一切陌生怕给自己丢脸，给老师丢脸真的有忐忑不安的心里

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Posted: 2007-11-24 15:10:45 Post subject:

。这里不兴叫老师哟，都是诗友：）。作业也放到这里记得！。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-11-24 15:11:26 Post subject:

sunyunjuan2008 wrote:

排版有问题，重新来

乡愁
余光中

小时候
乡愁是一枚小小的邮票
我在这头
母亲在那头
长大后
乡愁是一张窄窄的船票
我在这头
新娘在那头
后来啊
乡愁是一方矮矮的坟墓
我在外头
母亲在里头
而现在
乡愁是一湾浅浅的海峡
我在这头
大陆在那头

。
_________________
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Posted: 2007-11-24 15:13:18 Post subject:

。还等着评论还有你写的同样格式，不同的内容比如风花雪月，春夏秋冬：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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