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早晨的三首短诗
一言
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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 18:43:28    Post subject: 早晨的三首短诗 Reply with quote

《解释》

今夜的灯光非常明亮
涌满房子的光拥挤着我的心灵
我怎会浪费这样美好的时光
在这美好的时光中
我可以做好多美好的事
看看窗外被灯光映亮的夜幕
听听从诗句淌过的旋律
用笔画着写着一个秘密
只要天亮
我就交给阳光去解释
一个夜晚的故事

《雨的结局》

天刚一黑
雨落下来
穿透了黑暗

很久很久以前
枯草和落叶就开始堆积
堆成一座高山

雨再次穿透了夜
从黑暗的间隙落下
穿透锁紧的门

我开始回忆
昨晚的星星和月亮
是否为那无法打开的门奔跑

雨再一次落下
穿透黑暗
穿透了黎明

《雪的情绪》

白天和黑夜一模一样
它们的表情
所要表达的情绪
像两个兄弟

我对飞鸟和游鱼说过
盖一间藏满阳光的房子
用山将它团团围住
温暖的

白天和黑夜
像两个陌生人来临
它们指控着对方
争论不休

我打开门
在光明与温暖中
它们化成一阵寒风
落下了雪
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 21:11:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

很耐品的一组诗歌. 提起来
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杯中冲浪
进士出身


Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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Location: 中国
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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 23:31:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

形象不足,没有活起来
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杯中冲浪.披履而行
http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006
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杨海军
进士出身


Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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Location: 吉林
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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 23:37:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错,问候一言诗人!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751
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