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抒怀
莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 15:52:41    Post subject: 抒怀 Reply with quote

晨雾，晨雾，
漫天未知归路。
依窗淡了闲愁，
银粟缓飞步幽，
幽步，幽步，
酿就东风来顾。

注：“银粟”（宋?杨万里诗—独往独来银粟地）
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PostPosted: 2007-11-22 20:34:42    Post subject: Reply with quote
幽雅。什么曲牌？
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-11-22 21:58:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
晓松 wrote:
幽雅。什么曲牌？
谢谢晓松兄点评！曲牌是调笑令。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-23 02:45:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
学习，问好莹雪。
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-11-23 17:14:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢你的问候，问好qxz-123456！
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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 15:59:43    Post subject: Re: 抒怀 Reply with quote
莹雪 wrote:

晨雾，晨雾，
漫天未知归路。
依窗淡了闲愁，
银粟缓飞步幽，
幽步，幽步，
酿就东风来顾。

注：“银粟”（宋?杨万里诗—独往独来银粟地）


幽洁, 幽愿.
"依窗淡了闲愁",妙句!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 16:23:45    Post subject: Reply with quote
景致依稀,情思迷离,意趣幽远.好词一首.
末句,词眼.
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 17:04:52    Post subject: Re: 抒怀 Reply with quote
冰清 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:

晨雾，晨雾，
漫天未知归路。
依窗淡了闲愁，
银粟缓飞步幽，
幽步，幽步，
酿就东风来顾。

注：“银粟”（宋?杨万里诗—独往独来银粟地）


幽洁, 幽愿.
"依窗淡了闲愁",妙句!
谢谢冰清老师的点评！问好 Razz
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 17:06:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
楚人 wrote:
景致依稀,情思迷离,意趣幽远.好词一首.
末句,词眼.
谢谢你的点评！问好
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