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三首短诗
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PostPosted: 2007-11-20 18:03:18    Post subject: 三首短诗 Reply with quote

《诗的等待》

夜幕早早来临
我以为它会带来很多礼物
赶走夕阳

天空挂起半个月亮
月光像水一样轻轻洒下
洒满这冰凉地冬夜

这是个冰凉寂寞地夜晚
连风都不曾看到
树下和树上

都像静静地等待
等待着
将要睁开眼睛的黎明

这是个多么寂寞的夜晚
没有风没有声音
只有这首诗和明亮的房子
等着…..等着…….
叩响门扉的眼睛

《相连》

月亮落下去
落下去满天月光
漆黑地夜
像我一样回到最初的地方

我只能一个字一个字
重新编织我的心灵
为那已经破碎的心
重新找到温暖的怀抱

我不知道天边有多远
只听人说
你在遥远的地方
像天边一样遥远

也许天亮之后
写完的诗被你捡到
因为昨晚
你的窗外有和我一样的夜幕

《思念》

是那么多思念
才让星星不停地闪烁
是那么多爱
才让月缺月圆
你说过你是我的月亮
然后悄悄离去
随着你离去的身影
夜幕像墨汁一样
覆盖了
覆盖了我的身心
夜晚
那么多星星闪烁
那是对你的思念
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-11-20 18:16:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

抒情, 温馨, 感人.
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kokho
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Joined: 30 Nov 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-11-20 23:16:43    Post subject: Reply with quote



最后那首 问好 :)

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乒乓、摄影、诗歌
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-11-20 23:35:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

精练多了~
鼓励鼓励! Very Happy
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博弈
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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 03:26:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

挺好的嘛,怎么没太看到你的诗呢?
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莞君
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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 07:21:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏了 问好你
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-11-22 18:25:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

因为昨晚
你的窗外有和我一样的夜幕
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