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“释名”诗—和平岛等诗友（摆擂台吧！）

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Posted: 2007-11-09 23:33:35 Post subject: “释名”诗—和平岛等诗友（摆擂台吧！）

“释名”诗—和平岛文/ 山城子和平岛禾畦走水开口笑，干嘛腰间插两刀？鸟儿收爪落山上，细辨原是和平岛。 2007-11-10于文化村 “释名”诗—迪拜文/ 山城子迪拜不是游走是由走，串起两干于手右。以城为名在中东，诗成惊世自风流。 2007-11-10于文化村 “释名”诗—博弈文/ 山城子博弈黑白世界显身手，无论输赢在前头。醉是诗文讲平仄，一身学识无人过。 2007-11-10于文化村 “释名”诗—杨光文/ 山城子杨光木易合而披阳，谐音美而阳光。阳光——杨光，哺育无数诗行。 2007-11-10于文化村

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Posted: 2007-11-09 23:55:38 Post subject:

第一时间欣赏，谜语诗～

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-11-10 00:39:09 Post subject:

拆字功夫了得!哈哈----- 先生厉害! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-11-10 03:13:07 Post subject:

WOW, 好文才.学一个. 临屏草和, 粗糙些, 老师见笑了杯中不见木木在口中栽冲水抵中流(不好意思, "冲"字牵强了点, "击水抵中流"应好些.) 博浪有良才

山城子
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Posted: 2007-11-10 07:29:19 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

WOW, 好文才.学一个. 临屏草和, 粗糙些, 老师见笑了 Embarassed

杯中不见木
木在口中栽
冲水抵中流(不好意思, "冲"字牵强了点, "击水抵中流"应好些. Razz

)
博浪有良才

嵌字有功夫！挺好！——我来个字迷格吧！

“释名”诗--杯中冲浪

杯中冲浪
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不出头了木不出头。
剑分一口上下都露。
冷水袭钟金不见了。
温水流来有良人就。

2007-11-10夜

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Posted: 2007-11-10 07:50:31 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

拆字功夫了得!哈哈-----
先生厉害!

老乡好！那就给你拆拆——

“释名”诗--韩少君
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韩少君

乾坤遗乞伟人凋，
劣而无力亦非小，
群羊掉队不必找，
韩少君君吃掉了。

2007-11-10夜临屏

山城子
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Posted: 2007-11-10 08:16:43 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

第一时间欣赏，谜语诗～

就给你也谜语一回吧！

“释名”诗--半溪明月
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半溪明月

没人陪伴夜已阑，
水淹蹊径足不见，
抬头并肩有日月，
日失明亮婵娟俏。

2007-11-11零时临屏

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Posted: 2007-11-10 09:03:36 Post subject:

山城子老师的谜语诗厉害～～我的写的还挺美的，喜欢收走！

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Posted: 2007-11-10 10:22:39 Post subject:

古韵的拆字高手多鼠键蹦蹦跳跳山城庙里小道古韵拆字多多这边风景独好 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-11-10 12:05:10 Post subject: Re: “释名”诗—和平岛等诗友（摆擂台吧！）

哈哈，山城子高手，即释上一首，请笑纳：七绝-“释名”诗—山城子文/ 秋叶修炼为仙人远去，土堆砖砌已成行。了无担负身如燕，集市峰边好汉郎。改一下。

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Posted: 2007-11-10 14:47:53 Post subject:

凑回热闹——释名山城子出门只见一重山载土通途成瞬间万众愚公今又现益加了然列仙班 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2007-11-10 17:16:40 Post subject:

山城子老师“释名”诗果然了得！也来凑个热闹，出个字谜~ 层峦叠嶂历沧桑，无道秦王筑土墙。孔孟老庄无名气，山城“名释”开新章。

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Posted: 2007-11-10 17:23:09 Post subject:

释秋叶万顷嘉禾庆稔年熊熊社火喜盈天人人有口皆曰乐十亿农家奏管弦 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2007-11-10 18:41:21 Post subject:

临屏5分钟草作, 秋香MM莫恼, 白水溜了 <戏说秋叶> 大火一把烧禾田霜秋红日映碧天口干舌燥祈上帝一枚十字挂胸前

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Posted: 2007-11-11 00:32:09 Post subject:

秋葉最後那句應該是“好兒郎”吧？釋繁體的秋葉落霞紅勝火，飛鳥過禾田。草木世塵外，我心如澹煙。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

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Posted: 2007-11-11 04:43:08 Post subject: 回

哇，这里好热闹！释一下戴先生，见笑．载袖弃车走，漂泊到异乡．（我的电脑没繁体字）挥毫北美枫，诗词并肩王．

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Posted: 2007-11-11 05:13:05 Post subject:

秋日赏枫叶，拂晓看劲松．月白映湖水，雪莹诗意浓．

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Posted: 2007-11-11 08:49:37 Post subject:

谢谢各路高手！今天到这里已经过了子时，先留下两个帖子，明天一一回复！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2007-11-11 08:50:18 Post subject:

“释名”诗—白水文/山城子白水皇离王座说是找勺有勺在旁方可闲聊冰河解冻汹涌滔滔浪花三叠流成浩淼 2007-11-11于文化村 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2007-11-11 08:50:50 Post subject:

“释名”诗—子花文/山城子子花了又未了横剑在腰喝令雪化上长青草组字谜格汉家瑰宝送尔藏身忍俊勿笑 2007-11-11于文化村 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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