zhangmin
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逃避一晚上,我的泪水
还是滴到母亲手上
疼痛,十指连心
终于,墙角的雪放心离去
我把哭泣存放
腊梅的脸上.刻画出微笑
母亲的,女儿的
欣慰与自豪
都为了父亲手中的炮仗
弟弟捂着耳朵
去偷看,姥姥压箱底的嫁衣
我的脚无法迈开大步
烟花被时光重叠
我把诺言挂在风上.随缘
婆婆的眼光,不再挑剔
老公带着儿子,抱起鲤鱼
走进娘家门
中国.江苏.张敏 |
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古井
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Posts: 190
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| Posted: 2007-11-24 08:14:10 Post subject: |
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| 冷峻的语言下面感情奔涌！ |
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杯中冲浪
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杯中冲浪
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杯中冲浪
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zhangmin
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| Posted: 2007-11-24 16:53:45 Post subject: |
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谢谢古井,问好,远握.
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风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。 |
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zhangmin
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| Posted: 2007-11-24 16:54:50 Post subject: |
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谢谢杯中冲浪,远握.
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风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。 |
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赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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| Posted: 2007-11-24 17:18:59 Post subject: |
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逃避一晚上,我的泪水
还是滴到母亲手上
疼痛,十指连心
终于,墙角的雪放心离去 .......节制有弹性，喜欢前两节,多来交流. |
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zhangmin
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| Posted: 2007-11-24 20:13:24 Post subject: |
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谢谢,赵老师,希望推荐.
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