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卜算子．秋游四首

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-11-14 23:51:02 Post subject: 卜算子．秋游四首

卜算子．秋游一斜阳月影追，逝水山川绕。几树枫红写相思，尤恐佳人笑。何处起风情，惹却归鸦闹。一地童心去复来，漫唱渔家傲。卜算子.秋游二幽径叶铺床，暮色妆初定。山水重重云雾间，疑有仙人影。步履更相轻，只怕惊秋兴。一点闲情写作诗，欲与天呼应。卜算子．秋游三暮色暖枫林，是处斜阳静。涧水潺潺独向东，不照红尘影。取叶悄凝思，只恨无人应。几劫寒霜未说休，写尽三分冷。卜算子．秋游四秋色不染尘，只是无人问。天地苍茫一线牵，写尽千般恨。寒起欲邀风，吹过菊花信。何效苍生逐利名？寂寞还为本。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-11-15 15:06:12 Post subject:

秋游抒秋兴，感慨无烦扰。拜读，欣赏。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2007-11-15 17:44:16 Post subject:

拜读暗香的秋游词，真好词！词中有景，有情，有思，有感。值得拜读再三。“一点闲情写作诗，欲与天呼应。”妙笔！笔如其名暗香来。

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Posted: 2007-11-17 15:12:30 Post subject:

秋游三上片最有味道，下片意思似乎卻未表達好。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

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Posted: 2007-11-17 17:37:48 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

拜读暗香的秋游词，真好词！词中有景，有情，有思，有感。值得拜读再三。“一点闲情写作诗，欲与天呼应。”妙笔！笔如其名暗香来。

谢谢鼓励。问好。
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暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-11-17 17:38:15 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

拜读暗香的秋游词，真好词！词中有景，有情，有思，有感。值得拜读再三。“一点闲情写作诗，欲与天呼应。”妙笔！笔如其名暗香来。

谢谢鼓励。问好。

谢谢老师指教。我再改．
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Posted: 2007-11-17 17:38:39 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

拜读暗香的秋游词，真好词！词中有景，有情，有思，有感。值得拜读再三。“一点闲情写作诗，欲与天呼应。”妙笔！笔如其名暗香来。

问好．多指教。
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duzhi
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Posted: 2007-11-17 18:28:48 Post subject:

有才气，有豪情，欣赏。 _________________ 清狂傲世随天性,仗义疏财任我行。博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/duzhizhang440

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Posted: 2007-11-20 20:01:34 Post subject:

duzhi wrote:

有才气，有豪情，欣赏。

多谢．多指教。问好．
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