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晨敛
杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-11-16 06:30:27    Post subject: 晨敛 Reply with quote

 晨敛


我看见早晨的花收敛起翅膀

沉睡,泪痕里透着月光照耀过

的世界.草地洒满星星的眼睛 

呵,驾着时光马车的神,鞭梢

像目光里的裂痕 又像在林中

开放的萤火.无法躲避.天空

到处都是弥漫的花朵.吻向

时光深远的忧伤.飞.让我们

飞.轻得像一缕雾汽,飘向丛林

深处.沉静得像正在做梦的潮汐
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-11-16 14:19:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

凄美轻灵, 似幻似真
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-11-16 16:27:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢可爱的白水诗人!祝好!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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徐业华
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PostPosted: 2007-11-16 17:34:08    Post subject: Re: 晨敛 Reply with quote

[quote="杨海军"] 晨敛


草地洒满星星的眼睛 

呵,驾着时光马车的神,鞭梢

像目光里的裂痕 又像在林中

开放的萤火.无法躲避.天空

到处都是弥漫的花朵.

圣洁美好的早晨,艺术的最高境界就是在似与非似之间。问好!
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2007-11-16 22:22:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

充满了诗意  欣赏了 问好
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-11-17 05:53:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢业华兄和吉祥女巫诗人的赏读!祝二位诗人好!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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