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六绝-赏莲抒怀
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PostPosted: 2007-11-16 17:47:20    Post subject: 六绝-赏莲抒怀 Reply with quote


水碧清幽雅溢,莲红细饰柔留。
晨思岁去新事,夜梦年来旧愁。


六绝仄起首句不押韵格式:(一、二句对仗)
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PostPosted: 2007-11-16 19:47:35    Post subject: 回 Reply with quote

谢莹雪MM介绍六绝写法,学习了。我写点东西常常率性而为,胡填乱写,出律惹笑。
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莹雪
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Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都
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PostPosted: 2007-11-16 22:34:29    Post subject: Re: 回 Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
谢莹雪MM介绍六绝写法,学习了。我写点东西常常率性而为,胡填乱写,出律惹笑。
GG,我也是昨天整理旧体诗词文档时,发现两年前搜集到的六言诗格式,偶然兴起就写了一首。其实六言我也写过,但那是好几年前的事了,嘻嘻,也是率性而为 Wink sticking tongue
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