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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2007-11-12 19:59:10    Post subject: 梦 . 缘 Reply with quote
梦 . 缘



一个连接着一个
梦 以不绝的姿态
频繁的 出现
铺陈在寂冷的夜里
黑色的风轻旋着
推开一扇扇恐惧之门


伸手 握住的依然是空
触不到梦的脉络
冰凉而柔软的肌体
蛇一般蜿蜒于暗夜
而叹息的声音 一定
传的好远 好远


总也不能看清楚
传说中 那根线的颜色
也无法确定它的两端
究竟系在何处
你的手腕 我的手腕
还是 我们的心脉


那点点堆积的思念
可否 将这根细细的魂
滋养得健硕肥美
使得岁月的利刃
再不能轻易的
将它斩段
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-11-12 21:19:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
好可爱的笔名, 诗歌也不错. 欢迎新朋友.
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-11-12 22:13:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
欢迎新朋友~ Very Happy
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-11-12 22:14:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
欢迎新朋友~ Very Happy
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 00:07:23    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
好可爱的笔名, 诗歌也不错. 欢迎新朋友.

谢谢你美言哦　　向你问好
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 00:07:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
好可爱的笔名, 诗歌也不错. 欢迎新朋友.

谢谢你美言哦　　向你问好
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 00:07:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
好可爱的笔名, 诗歌也不错. 欢迎新朋友.

谢谢你美言哦　　向你问好
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 00:09:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
半溪明月 wrote:
欢迎新朋友~ Very Happy

你好　谢谢你的欢迎　　问好　　对了怎么一下出来那么多？晕
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莞君
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 10:19:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
提 感觉不错
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 17:18:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
莞君 wrote:
提 感觉不错

谢谢莞君,问好了
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-11-14 00:11:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
那点点堆积的思念
可否 将这根细细的魂
滋养得健硕肥美
使得岁月的利刃
再不能轻易的
将它斩段

诗意。问好。
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2007-11-16 22:17:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
韩少君 wrote:
那点点堆积的思念
可否 将这根细细的魂
滋养得健硕肥美
使得岁月的利刃
再不能轻易的
将它斩段

诗意。问好。


谢谢少君的点评　　问好了
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2007-11-16 22:17:32    Post subject: Reply with quote
韩少君 wrote:
那点点堆积的思念
可否 将这根细细的魂
滋养得健硕肥美
使得岁月的利刃
再不能轻易的
将它斩段

诗意。问好。


谢谢少君的点评　　问好了
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