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《苍白的忌日》
墨林
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 08:11:30    Post subject: 《苍白的忌日》 Reply with quote
《苍白的忌日》

文/墨林

屠宰开始了
来往车辆如刀
平坦马路如菜板
就这样
就是这样
一条条活鲜鲜生命
被无情剥夺了
怎么会
怎么会是
“11.8”一个发财者的吉日
岂能为一个花季少女的忌日＊

天痛了
地痛了
一座城市从沉痛陷入
悲
哀
!

＊一个花季少女的忌日：2007年11月8日的早上，在山东青岛的南京路与辽阳西路发生车祸，油罐车由于抢行红灯与12路公交车相撞，惯性又撞向212路公交车，车祸带走了一个花季少女的生命，她读初中。
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上城
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 08:19:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
生命太脆弱了。就诗论，语言可以更深入些呀。问好墨林。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 10:04:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
不错的一个 提
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 15:31:47    Post subject: Reply with quote
墨林写诗的关注和取材方向是真诗人大诗人的方向。此首如用场景描写会更生动更感人。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 19:14:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
不错的墨着点
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