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五律咏路灯

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-11-27 18:40:50 Post subject: 五律咏路灯

卓然街巷立俯首烛行人不论强与弱何谈富或贫浑身溅秽水满面驻灰尘不畏风霜恶一心为万民 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-27 20:36:49 Post subject:

借物咏志. 好

冰清
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Posted: 2007-11-28 09:54:42 Post subject:

温恭、蕴藉!

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-11-28 12:25:45 Post subject:

谢谢白水冰清老师点评,向二位问好. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

秋叶
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Posted: 2007-11-28 12:38:37 Post subject: Re: 五律咏路灯

黄洋界 wrote:

卓然街巷立俯首烛行人

不论强与弱何谈富或贫

浑身溅秽水满面驻灰尘

不畏风霜恶一心为万民

黄老师，很好的咏物诗，“与”是否出律？供参考。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-11-28 13:28:02 Post subject:

谢谢秋叶指出出律的"与"字,换成"和"字如何? _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Posted: 2007-11-28 16:29:15 Post subject:

诗言志。问好黄老师。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-11-29 07:54:21 Post subject:

谢庆宏评阅，问好。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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