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送你一支歌(外一首)
冰清
同进士出身


Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921

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PostPosted: 2007-11-23 11:33:27    Post subject: 送你一支歌(外一首) Reply with quote

<送你一支歌>

平视,不愿拔高
想见更多的人

静, 再静
好听车轱辘转身

谁说你抱着的只是灌木丛、树?
难道看不见火、喷泉
勒骨、脊梁和城池

空谷里,有足音


<坚实的文字>

见过大山的浪么?
那是远古海洋
两亿多年前
鱼龙栖息游玩的地方

见过茫茫戈壁么?
倒回几千万年
它一片汪洋
潇洒恣肆,带点
与生俱来的王者气息

人们喜欢石油天然气
呼呼的苗、蓝蓝的焰
爱看鱼龙在海里爬
还有人不惜重金
买回海百合
纤细茎干、柔弱的冠

可有多少人
能记起火山、海啸、山崩
夷平、隆起, 再夷平
记住它孕育这
一茬一茬
新生命的过程

贝壳、植物和脊椎动物
这大片小片化石
是它衍变的最坚实的文字
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白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2007-11-23 11:37:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清老师, 真高兴看见你的新诗. 写的真不错.
送朵花儿 rose
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冰清
同进士出身


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PostPosted: 2007-11-23 11:43:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水,我这不还在忙着改吗? 你的鼓励就到家了。
好感动!
多指点啊!
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枫桥
秀才


Joined: 28 May 2007
Posts: 149
Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2007-11-23 14:06:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

朋友:空谷里 有跫音
更有点意识。
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锋镝牢囚取次过,依然不费我弦歌。死犹未肯输心法,贫也岂能奈我何。
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2007-11-23 20:58:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢枫桥鼓励!
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半溪明月
榜眼


Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-11-23 21:43:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎冰清~
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