莹雪
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 Posted: 2007-11-04 17:46:11 Post subject: 五绝－冬日抒怀 |
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冷窗观景寂，温阁动幽思。
自别三秋后，新书废旧诗。 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2007-11-04 19:42:45 Post subject: |
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| 莹雪MM又读又写，学而不厌，佳作不断，真是“无边莹雪潇潇下”呀。 |
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莹雪
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| Posted: 2007-11-04 21:56:18 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| 莹雪MM又读又写，学而不厌，佳作不断，真是“无边莹雪潇潇下”呀。 |
呵呵，谢谢GG点评！我一定继续努力  |
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wenshan
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| Posted: 2007-11-05 05:41:33 Post subject: Re: 五绝－冬日抒怀 |
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| 莹雪 wrote: |
冷窗观景寂，温阁动幽思。
自别三秋后，新书废旧诗。 |
次韵和莹雪《冬日抒怀》
菊残留雅韵，梅绽动情思。
风送半空雪，飘飞片片诗。
(加拿大/闻山)
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郑达夫
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| Posted: 2007-11-05 05:59:59 Post subject: |
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自别三秋后，新书废旧诗。 
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莹雪
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| Posted: 2007-11-05 16:38:12 Post subject: Re: 五绝－冬日抒怀 |
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| wenshan wrote: |
次韵和莹雪《冬日抒怀》
菊残留雅韵，梅绽动情思。
风送半空雪，飘飞片片诗。
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《冬日抒怀》原韵和闻山
叶红舒美韵，观罢触佳思。
漫撒轻盈雪，悠然梦入诗。
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