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诗四首
冯六一
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Joined: 16 Aug 2007
Posts: 18
Location: 湖南岳阳
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PostPosted: 2007-11-03 20:50:27    Post subject: 诗四首 Reply with quote

Surprised Surprised 抵抗

我梦见河流
触及天空

一张笑脸
从各个方面
抵御寒冷

一场对弈
在进与退之间
互相吸引

我还看见
声音在沉默
积雪在融化

王一样的时间
昂起头颅


Surprised

阳光照耀
珠玉隐隐

倾斜的身子
血脉延续
行走不断

流淌的河水
以一种热情
回到从前

一线酽浓的乳汁
悬挂天地
喂养着人间


Surprised 截面

截开一条河流
鱼儿停顿

季节的内部
一颗受孕的种子
饱含喜悦

天空的瞬间
一只飞翔的鸟儿
正在接近化石

而声音的截面
骨头站立
挡不住腐朽


Surprised 返回

把自己的光芒
撕成碎片

让太阳陈旧
还原身体
在一滴水中歌唱

镜子燃烧容颜
叶子依然暗红
声音像种子一样
返回了嘴唇

我的赞美
布满了伤痕
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杯中冲浪
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Location: 中国
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PostPosted: 2007-11-04 01:50:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

1、3 很好,灵性十足。
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