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我的童年并不遥远，（连韵）

boyintian
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Posted: 2008-04-16 20:28:34 Post subject: 我的童年并不遥远，（连韵）

我的童年并不遥远我的小名叫圆圆红苹果一样的脸每个笑都很灿烂小嘴长得樱桃一般说起话来也格外的甜我的家在城镇的边缘靠着低矮的小山面朝青绿的农田悠长的小河静而清浅花花草草挤满了河的两岸我的童年并不遥远看洋槐上的秋千依旧摇晃在眼前垂柳下的翘板还驻有依稀的动感微波的河面漂过我手折的小船渺远的天边悬挂着我几许心愿仍见满夜空的亮点在宁静的祝福里微闪我的童年并不遥远

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-04-16 22:08:31 Post subject:

什么是连韵？问好新朋友~

boyintian
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Posted: 2008-04-17 06:53:19 Post subject:

就是为了读着自然顺口，韵律一致，但不追求文字上的刻意，或者．不完全一致但音的音乐性强，如是融为一体一种想要得自然质感吧．呵呵

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