莹雪
进士出身
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菊韵流芳，送秋归雁，恰逢红叶新装。
此时休憩，期待冷梅芳。
运笔浓书畅句，闲抒律、笑对晨光。
谁词赋？柳眉莲步，婉转醉言长。
何人心语妙，行文语俏，如沐春阳。
看银杏稀黄，怕对阴凉。
叹赞轻姿翠柏，经冷雨、依旧无恙。
歌吟道，休因坎坷，飞泪自寻伤。 |
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郑达夫
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Joined: 29 Oct 2007
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Location: 福建永春仙夾園德樓 362604
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偶是老道
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| Posted: 2007-11-02 22:31:56 Post subject: |
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未識此體。不知何人變格？
恙亦可爲平聲么？請教。
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游向高原的鱼
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Joined: 20 May 2007
Posts: 382
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| Posted: 2007-11-02 23:43:34 Post subject: |
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欣赏－周末快乐！
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征尘载袖
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Joined: 18 Aug 2007
Posts: 527
Location: 臭豆腐作坊
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| Posted: 2007-11-03 04:02:33 Post subject: |
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这朵菊花真好看^_^
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-11-03 17:12:08 Post subject: |
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谢谢，您好！ |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-11-03 17:44:01 Post subject: |
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未識此體。不知何人變格？
恙亦可爲平聲么？請教。 |
據我所知格式是這樣“滿庭芳、九十五字，前片四平韻，後片五平韻。過片二字，亦有不葉韻連下為五言句者”，格式如下：
◎●○△，◎○◎▲，●◎○●○△。
●○○▲，○●●○△。
◎●○○●▲，◎◎▲、◎●○△。
○○▲，◎○◎▲，◎●◎○△。
○○○●▲，○○●▲，◎●○△。
●○●○△，◎●○△。
◎●◎○●▲，◎◎▲、◎●○△。
○○▲，◎○◎▲，◎●●○△。 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-11-03 17:45:49 Post subject: |
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谢谢－周日快乐！ |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2007-11-03 17:47:00 Post subject: |
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谢谢^_^ |
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