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霜天晓角－登临抒怀

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-10-31 17:05:05 Post subject: 霜天晓角－登临抒怀

登临远眺，落玉山川秀。丹叶临寒气傲，经风瘦、伴秋走。冷透，山素缟、诗魂慵懒久。非是无文倾道，舒胸臆、笔挥就。

郑达夫
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Posted: 2007-11-03 06:46:17 Post subject:

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莹雪
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Posted: 2007-11-03 17:10:22 Post subject:

郑达夫 wrote:

问好～～

谢谢，您好！

晓松
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Posted: 2007-11-05 18:27:20 Post subject:

落玉山川秀。欣赏~

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-11-05 19:18:22 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

落玉山川秀。欣赏~

谢谢晓松兄点评！

qinghongh
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Posted: 2007-11-05 19:24:51 Post subject:

舒胸臆，笔挥就。莹雪MM好潇洒。 ”舒胸臆“或”抒胸臆“？

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-11-05 23:50:15 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

舒胸臆，笔挥就。

莹雪MM好潇洒。

”舒胸臆“或”抒胸臆“？

谢谢qinghonghGG点评和建议！ Razz

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