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七绝 洛阳牡丹
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PostPosted: 2007-10-30 18:24:19    Post subject: 七绝 洛阳牡丹 Reply with quote
七绝 洛阳牡丹

牡丹华贵沁芬芳， 风骨铮铮藐女皇。
国色天香酬百姓， 一朝绽放古都香。

陈德标先生《牡丹》原玉：

自怜丽质总芬芳
倾国倾城绝代妆
花不迷人人自醉
何能诬我媚君王

郑达夫读陈德标先生《牡丹》：

雍容华贵沁芬芳，
带露含苞博淡妆。
丽质天然师造化，
回眸一笑醉君王。
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PostPosted: 2007-10-31 00:10:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
国色天香赠百姓，
一朝绽放满洛阳。

欣赏学习！！～～
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PostPosted: 2007-10-31 17:59:58    Post subject: 回郑达夫 Reply with quote
谢达夫兄赏读，问候！
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-10-31 19:52:58    Post subject: Reply with quote
好气势。问好GG Razz
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PostPosted: 2007-11-01 09:01:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
“国色天香增百姓“中“增”字可否换成“偕”字，

以表牡丹自觉自愿来到百姓当中，请酌。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-01 16:49:47    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄老师一字师也，谢谢！我无法删余贴，只有版主有此权。不过没关系。也谢谢莹雪MM赏读。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-01 17:22:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
好诗好和. 顶一个.
多的帖我删了, 这几天网是有点不好用. 问好黄老师和QINGHONG. Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-11-01 18:01:48    Post subject: 回白水 Reply with quote
谢白水赞赏及帮黄老师删贴。祝安好。
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