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太阳和月亮

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Posted: 2007-10-19 23:30:41 Post subject: 太阳和月亮

太阳和月亮黄娟一太阳一个劲地追赶月亮因为月亮孤独月亮拼了命地朝前走因为她惦着地球上正有许多人在赶夜路二在白天有时候我们也会看到月亮月亮的脸很苍白月亮是在等太阳太阳高高兴兴的来了月亮一面对他微笑一面却又一步步一步步地离开三月亮病倒的时候她就把从前捡的星星全都挂出来了四太阳想月亮想得太厉害的时候就躲进云里去哭有时候是无声地哭有时候是嚎啕不顾有时候太阳一边哭一边还不忘给人一点阳光呢哎五月亮有时候也哭钻进被窝里去哭因为，说实在的有谁在长夜里不会不想到些什么呢尤其秋已深时六太阳和月亮在人们高兴的时候他们也就高兴了尽管他们曾经被人类那么恶毒地诅咒过怨恨过比如月亮缺的时候是错圆的时候也是错 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

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Posted: 2007-10-20 08:44:28 Post subject:

喜欢这种清淡的笔触, 读着挺感动的. 比如类似这样的诗行: 太阳和月亮在人们高兴的时候他们也就高兴了尽管他们曾经被人类那么恶毒地诅咒过怨恨过

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Posted: 2007-10-20 13:29:40 Post subject:

这类诗歌我写得比较少,而且奇怪的是,那时我大学刚毕业不久,那时侯似乎应该比较强烈才对 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

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Posted: 2007-10-21 04:21:42 Post subject:

呵呵，童话式的故事，很形象丰富～比如月亮缺的时候是错圆的时候也是错很有余味～赞一个！！！

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Posted: 2007-10-21 09:54:06 Post subject:

从深圳市罗湖区小学生童话作品集里抄来的吧 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-10-21 13:08:37 Post subject:

对,我去深圳流浪的时候就住在罗湖区,而且可巧,我亲戚家的孩子有文章在出版发行的作文书上,可想而知她该有些藏书 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

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Posted: 2007-10-21 15:40:27 Post subject:

怪不得那么面熟呢，在某夜某垃圾桶边偶遇过。我各区转。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-10-21 15:55:54 Post subject:

比如月亮缺的时候是错圆的时候也是错喜欢！！！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-10-21 16:18:55 Post subject:

你是癞皮的还是丧家的?(nobody?) 各位好 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

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Posted: 2007-10-21 16:22:57 Post subject:

都是。你呢？ _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-10-31 02:17:56 Post subject:

太阳和月亮在人们高兴的时候他们也就高兴了尽管他们曾经被人类那么恶毒地诅咒过怨恨过比如月亮缺的时候是错圆的时候也是错 _________________ 安徽六安市裕安区政协王晓琴邮编：237000 伊妹儿：wangxiaoqin3@126.com 安徽琴子的BLOG http://blog.sina.com.cn/wxq3

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