莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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 Posted: 2007-10-27 17:35:26 Post subject: 点绛唇－冬雨 |
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雨送残秋，盛装老叶归心就。
泣歌重奏，酝酿幽眠候。
闲坐琼楼，赏菊经霜久。
风寒透，此时盛秀，唯恐明日瘦。 |
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叶英儿
秀才
Joined: 03 Jun 2006
Posts: 577
Location: 中国
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| Posted: 2007-10-28 00:54:02 Post subject: 好诗,问好. |
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| 好诗,问好. |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-10-28 16:12:05 Post subject: Re: 好诗,问好. |
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谢谢,问好. |
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梅奈何
童生
Joined: 20 Feb 2007
Posts: 75
Location: 天津
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-10-30 16:31:59 Post subject: |
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谢谢。 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2007-10-30 17:37:09 Post subject: 回点绛唇-冬雨 |
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残秋，老叶，泣歌，风寒透，明日瘦...
莹雪MM好词，深得李清照之风啊！读来有些伤感。多沐浴些阳光，少吹些风寒。 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2007-10-31 17:15:16 Post subject: Re: 回点绛唇-冬雨 |
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残秋，老叶，泣歌，风寒透，明日瘦...
莹雪MM好词，深得李清照之风啊！读来有些伤感。多沐浴些阳光，少吹些风寒。 |
谢谢GG点评，我的小令大部分学的是李清照，所以  好吧，我一定接受GG的建议   |
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