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█废品收购站里的葵花

邵鹏飞
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Joined: 21 Oct 2007
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Posted: 2007-10-30 18:50:28 Post subject: █废品收购站里的葵花

█废品收购站里的葵花诗/邵鹏飞在这座物欲横陈的都市一角在邻近市郊的这家废品收购站内，一朵葵花此时正守护着自己坎坷的童年远处是高矮不齐的玻璃楼群近处是随地堆放的城市垃圾往来其间的，则是这座城市的寄居者一群手提肩扛着破编织袋或双肩用力拖地排车的外乡人，也包括她父母—— 2007年10月30日下午，当我步行路过市郊的这家废品收购站时，一个穿黄色夹袄的小女孩正独自坐在锈迹斑斑的铁制称台上守护着家里全部的家当灰色天空下她一手托着苍白的小圆脸蛋一手翻看着捡来的安徒生童话书像一朵枯萎的葵花寂寞又孤独。秋风萧瑟中她不时地仰起脑袋撅着冻得发紫的小嘴唇一双泪汪汪的眼睛望穿了远方冰冷的城池 2007.10.30于烟台 _________________ 博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/shaopengfeipoet

hepingdao
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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Posted: 2007-10-30 19:01:47 Post subject:

细节可以去掉一些加大空间和效果 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Posted: 2007-10-30 19:39:39 Post subject:

空间感没有完全打开，多来。

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