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五律闲居杂咏

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-10-27 13:16:44 Post subject: 五律闲居杂咏

老圃描秋叶苍崖绘劲松缘溪歌秀水策杖叹奇峰默读残碑刻欣闻古寺钟焚诗灰化蝶洗砚墨成龙 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-10-27 16:30:32 Post subject:

意蕴浓厚，尤喜尾二联。

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2007-10-28 17:36:16 Post subject:

谢谢莹雪点评，问好。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
同进士出身

Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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冰清Collection

Posted: 2007-10-29 10:24:57 Post subject:

闲居不闲,杂咏非杂. 拜读!

qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

qinghonghCollection

Posted: 2007-10-29 15:17:02 Post subject:

黄老师高雅，有松鹤之风。拜读！闲居不闲，杂咏非杂。冰清老师妙语好评！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-10-30 05:53:00 Post subject:

谢谢冰清老师qinghongh的评阅，向二位问好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

郑达夫
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Posted: 2007-10-31 02:44:46 Post subject:

默读残碑刻欣闻古寺钟欣赏～～ _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-11-04 17:23:08 Post subject:

谢郑达夫赏评，问好。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

贺兰山下
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Posted: 2007-11-05 05:13:02 Post subject:

焚诗灰化蝶洗砚墨成龙好句！ _________________ 贺兰山下，牧马放羊。

敦智
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Posted: 2007-11-05 05:54:23 Post subject:

欣赏诗中情怀，有仙风道骨。问好。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-11-05 08:20:40 Post subject:

谢谢贺兰山下敦志赐评，问好二位。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

晓松
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Posted: 2007-11-05 18:40:05 Post subject:

何时我有黄兄雅致，足矣！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-11-06 08:07:34 Post subject:

晓看云开处松韵远流香谢谢晓松关注，问好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

秋叶
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Posted: 2007-11-06 16:40:08 Post subject: Re: 五律闲居杂咏

黄洋界 wrote:

老圃描秋叶苍崖绘劲松

缘溪歌秀水策杖叹奇峰

默读残碑刻欣闻古寺钟

焚诗灰化蝶洗砚墨成龙

黄老师不但字，画精湛，格律诗也写得行云流水，且格律严谨，用古声韵入声运用自如，拜读了。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-11-07 15:10:17 Post subject:

谢谢秋叶的鼓励和赏评. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

征尘载袖
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Posted: 2007-11-09 18:03:31 Post subject:

晚霞羞上叶，晨雾淡苍松。花逐亭前水，影随身后峰。恭听无刻句，洗耳有丝钟。蜗角虚怀事，蝉钗实比龙。 ^_^ _________________

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-11-09 19:33:47 Post subject:

谢谢袖袖和诗，和诗淡雅，恰当用典，欣赏。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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