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　有人写情诗

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冰夕
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Posted: 2007-10-10 08:35:05 Post subject: 　有人写情诗

. 　　有人写情诗　　我只想知道童童过得好吗　　只想把发霉的书信晾晒月光下　　淋雨也无所谓　　反正笔划艰涩难懂　　晾晒风中的书信　　姿势依旧如蒙眼黑驹奔驰　　扬飞天秤上灰烬的姓氏　　砝码苦闷　　一说话就泄露　　时间的重量　　揭开小宇宙　　窜出漫天雪花的问候　　不知身在几零年代　　麦田上的梵谷　　弯腰　　拾起瘦成鎌月的耳朵　　倾听万籁虫鸣　　一些乌云轻易鼓吹泪水　　彻夜难眠的梦游　　我只想知道童童　　找回飞向野外的童心了没？　　faninsa.t　Oct10`2007 _________________ 阅夜.冰小夕 http://blog.sina.com.tw/faninsa223/

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-10 08:50:02 Post subject:

扬飞天秤上灰烬的姓氏　　砝码苦闷　　一说话就泄露　　时间的重量弯腰　　拾起瘦成鎌月的耳朵　　倾听万籁虫鸣很多精彩之笔从台湾来的, 写法都别具一格欢迎擅长言情的冰夕 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-10-10 09:04:14 Post subject:

欢迎新朋友～

博弈
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Posted: 2007-10-10 09:06:25 Post subject:

Glad to see you here! _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-10 09:07:03 Post subject:

半溪明月呀 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-10-10 09:11:44 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

半溪明月呀

这是新朋友博里的图片，抓过来的，不清楚是不是冰夕～ Very Happy

下了，晚安，大家！

冰夕
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Posted: 2007-10-10 09:31:26 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

扬飞天秤上灰烬的姓氏
　　砝码苦闷
　　一说话就泄露
　　时间的重量

弯腰
　　拾起瘦成鎌月的耳朵
　　倾听万籁虫鸣

很多精彩之笔

从台湾来的, 写法都别具一格

欢迎擅长言情的冰夕
Very Happy

＊
问好 hepingdao

冰夕初来新手，蒙您勉励
非常温馨。往后请多指教 ^_^

祝　秋安
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冰夕
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Posted: 2007-10-10 09:34:37 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

半溪明月呀

这是新朋友博里的图片，抓过来的，不清楚是不是冰夕～ Very Happy

下了，晚安，大家！

问好慧眼的半溪明月

那张 X光美人照，是张曼玉呵
不知哪位摄影大师所拍，让人眼睛发亮*
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hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-10 09:35:25 Post subject:

冰夕不客气应该是新来的老手也请多来指导 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

冰夕
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Posted: 2007-10-10 09:35:42 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

Glad to see you here!

问好博弈秋安
握手：）
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nobody
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Posted: 2007-10-10 12:05:30 Post subject:

读着帖子就在想，可能是台湾的。好像训练更扎实，古文底子好，很简明。欢迎问好。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-10-10 14:00:49 Post subject:

欣赏！博客建得也好！欢迎台湾诗人！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-11 03:29:21 Post subject:

冰夕, 很高兴在这见到你. 过去就喜欢你的诗歌, 清新, 柔情. 再读, 仍觉得美. 问好.

冰夕
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Posted: 2007-10-11 05:26:27 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

读着帖子就在想，可能是台湾的。好像训练更扎实，古文底子好，很简明。欢迎问好。

昨天我在这翻阅了几首诗
好比hepingdao写的【上帝的眼睛】简炼扼喉的灵视
然而台湾尚年轻
腹地小，我更微渺于求知中，来此学习丰饶各家诗艺的瞻仰与交流。

问好 nobody 我非常窝馨这里源涌的勉励！
盼往后，能多指点拙作。
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冰夕
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Posted: 2007-10-11 05:26:59 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

读着帖子就在想，可能是台湾的。好像训练更扎实，古文底子好，很简明。欢迎问好。

冰夕
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Posted: 2007-10-11 06:41:36 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

欣赏！博客建得也好！欢迎台湾诗人！

问好韩少君。感谢您造访。
请问少君有博客供阅读交流么!? Wink

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冰夕
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Posted: 2007-10-11 06:48:33 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

冰夕, 很高兴在这见到你. 过去就喜欢你的诗歌, 清新, 柔情. 再读, 仍觉得美. 问好.

亦欣悦再见白水浏亮诗质于印象中。

今晚不知怎么我老断线被弹出视窗呵
抽空再叙你诗中阅感 ^_^
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子花
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Posted: 2007-10-12 22:41:53 Post subject:

在多个论坛见过!问好~~台湾诗人

彭世学
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Posted: 2007-10-13 04:51:52 Post subject:

欣赏！问好冰夕！！ _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

雪硯
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Posted: 2007-10-17 07:33:27 Post subject:

小夕：現在才看道這帖子，不知您早先就註冊了。這問候遲到了，抱歉！雪硯 _________________ 大寂蜉蝣 http://blog.sina.com.tw/guogin100/

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