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微型诗五首

淡水
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淡水Collection

Posted: 2007-10-20 17:01:06 Post subject: 微型诗五首

水很轻易地融入了我的杯子又放弃了我的杯子我从来没有细品出它的味道 2007，10，10 雨坠落汇聚涛声骤起 2007，10，19 雪天白了地白了脚印深了 2007，10，19 瀑布平静而来涛涌直下汇入源泉之中 2007，10，20 浪甩起长鞭抽击礁石卷回一缕沙 2007，10，20

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2007-10-20 19:43:23 Post subject:

思绪闪念

淡水
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Joined: 06 Jul 2007
Posts: 82

淡水Collection

Posted: 2007-10-22 12:27:43 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

思绪闪念

多谢白水。

nobody
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Posted: 2007-10-22 14:02:35 Post subject:

喜欢它的短。但似乎还没有找到独特的角度，呈现别人看不到的惊奇。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2007-10-22 17:23:05 Post subject:

淡水的诗不淡啊，意蕴很深！呵呵 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

淡水
童生

Joined: 06 Jul 2007
Posts: 82

淡水Collection

Posted: 2007-10-23 16:56:29 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

淡水的诗不淡啊，意蕴很深！呵呵

多谢海军。问好。

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