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天仙子.问天

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Posted: 2007-10-17 10:54:29 Post subject: 天仙子.问天

花落花开春几度？月缺月圆何日住？去时莫道是来时，轮回路，连番苦，浩浩苍天谁做主？　此际遐思千万缕，偏恨无人能解语。若生双翼入云霄，红袖舞，豪气聚，肝胆应将天驾驭。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-10-17 11:32:48 Post subject:

若生双翼入云霄，红袖舞，豪气聚，肝胆应将天驾驭。此等豪气岂为一介书生所有! 学习了.

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Posted: 2007-10-17 16:58:55 Post subject:

婉转不失豪气。

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Posted: 2007-10-18 07:49:53 Post subject:

用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲！再读，百遍不嫌多……

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Posted: 2007-11-14 23:56:31 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

婉转不失豪气。

谢谢妹妹鼓励。
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Posted: 2007-11-14 23:57:48 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

若生双翼入云霄，红袖舞，豪气聚，肝胆应将天驾驭。

此等豪气岂为一介书生所有! 学习了.

醉了醉了，胡言乱语了．笑．问老师好．
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Posted: 2007-11-15 00:02:51 Post subject:

不亦悦乎 wrote:

用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲！
再读，百遍不嫌多……

呵呵．谢谢鼓励。
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qinghongh
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Posted: 2007-11-15 18:03:24 Post subject:

真是肝胆豪气贯长虹。

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Posted: 2007-11-20 19:58:59 Post subject:

谢谢。多指教。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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