莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
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 Posted: 2007-10-17 22:50:09 Post subject: 七绝－入冬有感 |
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菊英新醉送寒秋，
雁语情浓别玉楼。
心静挥毫文速至，
神清泼墨赋频收。 |
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不亦悦乎
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| Posted: 2007-10-18 07:02:31 Post subject: |
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好！
‘又醉’比较‘新醉’如何？ |
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莹雪
进士出身
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Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-10-18 16:23:20 Post subject: |
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| 不亦悦乎 wrote: |
好！
‘又醉’比较‘新醉’如何？ |
那要看诗的意向。 |
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wenshan
秀才
Joined: 29 Jul 2007
Posts: 112
Location: Canada
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| Posted: 2007-10-19 10:39:48 Post subject: Re: 七绝－入冬有感 |
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| 莹雪 wrote: |
菊英新醉送寒秋，
雁语情浓别玉楼。
心静挥毫文速至，
神清泼墨赋频收。 |
奉和莹雪<七绝－入冬有感 >
十月飞霜送晚秋，一声雁唳怕登楼。
寒天流景皆乡思，薄海同根共浪舟。
注：<思>读仄声。
(闻山于加西旅途)
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2007-10-19 18:29:40 Post subject: Re: 七绝－入冬有感 |
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| wenshan wrote: |
奉和莹雪<七绝－入冬有感 >
十月飞霜送晚秋，一声雁唳怕登楼。
寒天流景皆乡思，薄海同根共浪舟。
注：<思>读仄声。
(闻山于加西旅途) |
回和闻山<七绝－入冬有感 >
菊秀浓妆尽冷秋，雁声哀语咽琼楼。
瑟风叶落乡愁思，四海诗朋共泛舟。
注：同韵。
(莹雪于三燕家中) |
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