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上帝的眼睛

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hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-09 21:42:03 Post subject: 上帝的眼睛

天外有天有星星和荧火虫有银河和月亮船有你和我的臭脚踢脏的地球和球门的黑洞黑洞是宇宙的枪眼正对着上帝的瞳仁

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Posted: 2007-10-09 22:21:59 Post subject:

想象丰富，学习了~~ （岛，知道我看这首诗时在做什么吗，我在用诗对比你的眼睛，呵呵） _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-09 22:30:01 Post subject:

《眼镜》我的眼睛在玻璃后面挂着呢像电灯泡似的怕一掉下来天就黑了 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-09 22:53:53 Post subject:

《星星》上帝的唾沫星子还是荧火虫的屁眼我总比喻不好想往天上瞧瞧又怕天太黑找不着回家的马灯 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-09 23:09:22 Post subject:

《月牙》比任何比喻都美的哪一个就是你啦你笑眯眯的露出大白牙好像我是你嘴里的饼 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-09 23:25:48 Post subject:

《黑洞》它的胃张性很大它吃素也爱荤天底下的诗歌只不过是它的一根牙签 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-09 23:47:46 Post subject:

《银河》河上没鸟水下没鱼何以猎手举枪大熊和小熊的手中紧握着一把大银勺 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-09 23:55:25 Post subject:

《地球》这么脏的一个球那么多人乱抢好像上面有一块肥肉好像血不会流干好像肉不会变臭好像没有人的骨头 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-09 23:56:16 Post subject:

《月亮》新娘一样的眼睛盯着我耳环里的那枚戒指 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-10 00:02:33 Post subject:

《宇宙》宇宙太大我想写的东西里面都有了不想写的里面也包括把自己塞进去我压根就没存在过 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-10 00:05:34 Post subject:

写累了睡觉去 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-10-10 00:38:49 Post subject:

岛好象每天精力充沛啊,写诗歌和说话一样随口就来了~

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-10 08:28:26 Post subject:

我修炼了大半年呀 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-10 08:38:34 Post subject:

闭关出来，功力是不是增强了很多？天天在这舞枪弄棍的，只有白水的水平可以陪你练练，我还要多修修再和你比试下～

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-10 08:46:54 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

闭关出来，功力是不是增强了很多？天天在这舞枪弄棍的，只有白水的水平可以陪你练练，我还要多修修再和你比试下～ Very Happy

切磋切磋玩一玩闹一闹

中国古诗词的意境,博大精深
我整了个诗海,还真有用呀
Laughing

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-10-10 09:03:50 Post subject:

恩，有时间读些，我读的很少～

冰夕
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Posted: 2007-10-10 10:01:37 Post subject: Re: 上帝的眼睛

hepingdao wrote:

天外
有天

有星星和荧火虫

有银河和月亮船

有你和我
的臭脚

踢脏的地球
和球门的黑洞

黑洞是宇宙的枪眼
正对着
上帝的瞳仁

带骨的诗，汤汁仅有月亮船
踢进球门的是人肉包子

呵，好一句天外
有天
我真开了眼，从诗人瞳孔的视野，探见
如何抱怀苦难的关注

犀利着臭脚也能从容并列星星的
根本

冰夕阅后有感。问好 hepingdao
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韩少君
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Posted: 2007-10-10 14:08:50 Post subject:

有才－－－－－－－真不错的一组．迅速！而且到位．非常欣赏！问好！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

樱花听雨
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Posted: 2007-10-10 19:40:28 Post subject:

超级幽默。 _________________ 樱花听雨搜狐博客樱花听雨新浪博客

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Posted: 2007-10-11 03:57:25 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

半溪明月 wrote:

闭关出来，功力是不是增强了很多？天天在这舞枪弄棍的，只有白水的水平可以陪你练练，我还要多修修再和你比试下～ Very Happy

切磋切磋玩一玩闹一闹

中国古诗词的意境,博大精深
我整了个诗海,还真有用呀
Laughing

熟读唐诗三百首, 不会写诗也会偷.
你在墓穴里读了从先秦到今日万首诗词,到是不错. 可我怎么也不知道你在哪偷来的臭脚丫 Shocked

得罪, 溜了

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